Topic: Any Fantasy Tips?

Hi, I'm Lily (AKA ThatGreenWriter) and I'm a young author. Fist of all, can I just say I'm so excited to be a part of this house!

I'm trying to write my first novel, with the main genre being: Fantasy! I'm really enjoying the writing process so far, but I'd love to hear some advice about writing fantasy from someone who's experienced in writing novels, writing fantasy, or any other writer.

I've planned all of my story out, and now written the first 2 pages, and I'd really love any feedback on the opening pages. Link to my novel: https://www.booksie.com/content/thatgre … /version/2

Thanks again,