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Topic: Short Stories

Have you read the Rules? If you answered no go back and read them before going anything further (it may be a perilous journey if you don't). If you answered yes, congratulations the shiny gates beckon you forward.

This is the category where you can give and ask for reviews on short stories only.

Please remember to give a constructive review.

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The first person to come by gets a free review and can just ask without having to give one. Please be kind though and only ask on one category, leave the others for someone else.

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Looks like I'm the first :-)

I'd be happy if somebody reviewed any short story of mine, doesn't matter which one. Thanks in advance!

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I reviewed one of Oleg Roschin's stories. I would be very happy if someone reviewed one of my stories as well. Thanks so much!
-TH

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The story I reviewed was titled "A Christmas Story"

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I have reviewed "Intellectual Property" by ThunderousHunter. If someone could review "Guilty Conscience (edited)" I would be most grateful. Thanks!

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I've reviewed "Guilty Conscience" (edited). Very good piece of crime fiction, indeed!

I'd be very grateful if someone could review any of my short stories, doesn't matter which one. Thanks in advance!

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I just reviewed "PC Game" by Oleg. I would like if someone could check out my story "The Attack was over in Seconds."

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I reviewed "The Attack was over in Seconds" by mixtape02 and I'd appreciate it if anyone read any of my short stories.

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I reviewed "Intellectual Property' by ThunderousHunter.

Another brilliant short story that captures the humanity perfectly! Take the time and go read it, you won't be sorry!

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Kirsten Tousignant wrote:

I have reviewed "Intellectual Property" by ThunderousHunter. If someone could review "Guilty Conscience (edited)" I would be most grateful. Thanks!

Sorry, I didn't see he reviewed it before me!

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Does MysticWhisp's review still count? Just wanted to know how we proceed on this :-)

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Oleg Roschin wrote:

Does MysticWhisp's review still count? Just wanted to know how we proceed on this :-)


Yes it does. I think it's from something before but it doesn't matter. MysticWhisp is next in line for a review.

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I'm gonna review one of mystic whisps.  I'm new only got one story if somebody would review it for me

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I reviewed  'strange-r'

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I've reviewed "Greg the Great" by L.M. Hood!

I'd be very grateful if someone could review any short story of mine. Thank you!

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I reviewed scarlet beast by oleg roschin.  I am interested in having someone take a look at what I have so far on a story called "slow and steady"  It's not finished but there's some meat on it

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I reviewed "Slow and steady" by L.M Hood. If anyone checked out any of my works it would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!

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I reviewed "The Snowball Effect" by Thunderous Hunter.

I'd be very grateful if someone could review either "Scarlet Beast" or "Till We Have Monitors"

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I reviewed "Till We Have Monitors" by Oleg Roschin.

I'd be grateful if someone reviewed one of my short stories. Thanks!

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I reviewed "Underneath" by Smithy.

Can someone please review any of my short stories? Thank you very much in advance!

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I reviewed "Til We have Monitors" by Oleg Roschin.

If someone could check out my story "Stillville"  I would be very grateful! I think it needs some work.

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I reviewed "Galaxy 88" by Xälos Jüryin Vërdah.
It would be great if someone reviewed my story, "The Jade Princess".

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I reviewed "The Jade Princess" by Eden Teitel.

I'd be very grateful if someone could review any of my short stories. Thanks in advance!