This is a bit I cut off of chapter 3 of my Adventure Team 3: The Devil's Triangle book. I wanted to leave Mr. Pitch's introduction to another character in a later chapter... but I liked this piece so much (and it's so dark)... I wanted to share it.
elizabeth erin ether seems like a typical teenage girl. but, in fact she is a ghost. she joins with an organization called the assassins. their job: to kill all the monsters and demons that try to destroy the earth.
War is when good men send innocent men to lose their innocence. Fighting an enemy strictly because you are told too, killing another member of your very own species because they are trying to kill you as well, you lose that innocence. People who return from war are never the same as when they shipped off. And sometimes, while in the bowel of the beast, you must lose this innocence, lose the values you relied on and strictly do what you must to survive. Sometimes, in war, you die on the inside to not die on the outside.
After a failed suicide attempt and recuperation, 16 year old Shikauhno Lee moves away from her foster family in Washington (you know, like the one in the U.S) to her birthplace Ryojima, Japan-the largest fictional Japanese city. As she adjusts to her renewed life in Ryojima she learns about mysterious disappearances and murders plaguing the city known as Black Onda. Fresh upon her arrival, she crosses paths with a man who was reported missing. Oddly enough he denies being the missing man and he pursues Shikauhno, attempting to rip her heart out....literally. Just in time, a mystifying handsome man rescues Shikauhno by killing her pursuer and leaves her with these cryptic words, “Let the dead bury their own”.
When an old teammate that was suppose to be dead long ago turned up to be alive and is really pissed off by his "caused of death", he joins the dark leagues and turned against his former brothers in arms as he hunts them down like dogs.
Here is the first character draft of the 9, of our great gang leader, Yung-Dragon or "The Dragon"!
In reference to his build images can be found on my blog for my co-chum.
other than that any questions can also be answered on my blog.
Blog - BreenPeen.tumblr.com
Have a good one :) -Rayn
Literally Naming the characters of which will receive in-depth drafts as I progress with developing the story, the drafts will be published in the order they are listed, starting with Yung-Dragon.
The drafts will entail descriptive appearance for reference in design drafting at a later date, Brief summary of shared relationships, and an idea on their combat style and martial art abilities they possess. (An explanation on how martial art works in this world is incoming)
I hope you enjoy the next few weeks of uploading drafts and critique is always welcome, remember, this is in a visual novel format and is drafted as such, and i hope y'all don't get confused with my vocabulary and unique wording, these are all intended for my co-chum who is working on this with me.