I wrote this story based around a plot/backstory/characters suggested to me by a friend. Some of it is a bit silly and not intended to be taken seriously, but the majority of it is serious. You'll know which parts aren't.
I won't be taking this particular story any further, but some comments on writing style, expression, etc. would be great :)
This is a paper that i wrote for a prompt in school. I got nothing but positive comments from my peers when they read it, and many of them encouraged me to write more on the story. I've been wanting to try and write something around this, but I'm afraid that if I do, it won't be as good. any opinions are welcome, even negative ones.
John Naylor - a young man lost and alone, and constantly in trouble with the law.
One last chance was handed to him - conscription into the British army at a time of great uncertainty.
1938, and the war clouds were gathering after Neville Chamberlain's Munich conference with Adolf Hitler had promised 'Peace in our Time'.
Naylor was about to become a legend in his own lifetime...
This is a little story I wrote for school, well it was a draft, Please take note that the story might be confusing an my have a lot of grammar and spelling errors as this was made long ago and was made to be short. ( Summary) A normal girl leading and orphan life with only 3 friends, Suddenly she is attacked by strange people which changes her life forever. This story is about an orphan girl who leads a simple. Unknown potential lies within which could lead to the world being over thrown into the hands of an 18 year old boy, or could start a rebellion that will change history for millenniums to come. (REMEBER MANY MISTAKES MUCH CONFUSION, but its still a good book if you understand it )