I'm not finished with this story yet (no where near finishing actually) but I would really love some intro feedback on whether or not I should keep writing and where the readers would like to see it head to. Thanks a TON!
The lost Mind of Buffalo Morgan is old and new material taken from Mr. Hemmerle’s shows and woven into a powerhouse of hardcore comedy. There’s comedy everywhere in life and this novel will exploit that as a fact. From “Let’s bolt a cannon to the hood of my car" to "The Good, The Bad and The Ugly of Sex," there's laughs here for everyone. Is your family insane? Did you celebrate your divorce more than your wedding? Do you hate your job? You’ll love this book.
O.K. so here's the details. Book: New Moon; twilight saga #2
Author: Stephanie Meyer. Alright so we got some problems with the vampires, wolves, and relationship trouble. Here are some situations Bella gets in and what I would do if it were me. Basically this is what I would do in her shoes. You got me?
Hmmm... ever read twilight (sorry the first page) and go 'Where the hell is the plot?' or better yet 'Yawn she'll end up with him and be a vampire' just by reading the first line?
And then you have to put up the with thousands or thousands of pages describing him as a 'stone, marble god'?
Back when I half loved Twilight and half disliked it, I create this short "summary" of both the book and movie combined. (This was written around the time the movie first came out.)
It's written in script format. Hope you all like it!