hi guys, girls and anything or anyone else on this site, since i'm on my summer holidays at the moment, i thought I'd try doing something that I've never done before, so i wrote a short story that could potentially form the base of a story or something similar if i decide this is something that i really like and i should try writing some more.
the premise will be around the souls of human beings and what happens to them once the body dies, while i haven't explicitly written about them in the story, once people die, their souls will be kept around on earth until a member of a group known as the collector comes to collect the soul so that it can be reincarnated, i haven't really though of a plan for what i'd like to do with souls once they're collected.
for this short, concept or whatever you'd like to call it, i would REALLY appreciate feedback of any sort, is it good, is it bad, have i gone overboard on something, does my grammar plainly suck, any feedback as long as it has some constructive quality will be appreciated
Here's a rudimentary attempt at creating a convincing character - following Mira, an androgynous, reticent, and intelligent women of 25, in a state of befuddling melancholy. Anyway, leave a comment, advice, your opinion - cheers!
Just something that I had to write as I could not sleep, and well it's been a while since I tried writing to help sort out my thoughts. I also hope this is insightful and inspiring to my brothers and sisters that I'll later send this too.love you guys