this i had never expected but i never ccould have done this for someone but but but here i was going to fall after falling in love the word qhich i had considered in the past the most disgusting jumbled up letters to have ever been formed
hi guys, girls and anything or anyone else on this site, since i'm on my summer holidays at the moment, i thought I'd try doing something that I've never done before, so i wrote a short story that could potentially form the base of a story or something similar if i decide this is something that i really like and i should try writing some more.
the premise will be around the souls of human beings and what happens to them once the body dies, while i haven't explicitly written about them in the story, once people die, their souls will be kept around on earth until a member of a group known as the collector comes to collect the soul so that it can be reincarnated, i haven't really though of a plan for what i'd like to do with souls once they're collected.
for this short, concept or whatever you'd like to call it, i would REALLY appreciate feedback of any sort, is it good, is it bad, have i gone overboard on something, does my grammar plainly suck, any feedback as long as it has some constructive quality will be appreciated
Here's a rudimentary attempt at creating a convincing character - following Mira, an androgynous, reticent, and intelligent women of 25, in a state of befuddling melancholy. Anyway, leave a comment, advice, your opinion - cheers!
Just something that I had to write as I could not sleep, and well it's been a while since I tried writing to help sort out my thoughts. I also hope this is insightful and inspiring to my brothers and sisters that I'll later send this too.love you guys