I am currently trying to start up a new novel, and I wrote this first chapter. The whole vibe is "old-western-assassin" with a bit of steampunk in the mix. I have the basic outline of the plot but I was just looking for some feedback on whether on not I should continue. Any edits of just general comments would be greatly appreciated!
This is just a rough draft of a really long poetic short story I'm writing. I was inspired by the musical/play Hamilton, but more so by history itself, because I've always been interested in the American revolution. It's about the rise and fall of Benedict Arnold. I will continue to take away from, and add to it's content until I'm sure it is right. I still need to write an entire section on the events after he became a traitor. Enjoy
As most of my fans know, I disappeared for four months to try some art I would not do. I always swore I would only paint people. I trapped myself in a box. I needed to get out of this box. It isn't my greatest work, but it is what I needed to take next step. Phase 2 will be emerging but for now...let me share my journey.
This is a collection of 7 short stories, (some are very short) I have written during the course of a few years. Most of them take place in a post-apocalyptic setting, however there is one that's a little random and i hope you find it slightly humorous and brighter than the rest. Please provide with feedback on how to better these Short stories, and how I can better my writing in general.