Just a collection of thoughts and fantasy of my own creation, I am not a professional and have no concerns for proper English Grammar. Thanks for reading and I hope you have thoughts as expansive as the universe.
I am currently trying to start up a new novel, and I wrote this first chapter. The whole vibe is "old-western-assassin" with a bit of steampunk in the mix. I have the basic outline of the plot but I was just looking for some feedback on whether on not I should continue. Any edits of just general comments would be greatly appreciated!