This particular story came to me one night in a sudden burst of motivation. The idea came, and they kept coming. Before I knew it I had a whole story, in just one night. It is one of my only finished works, and I am very proud of it. Please give me your feedback.
Sex, lust, and infidelious problems. The perfect formula for a relationship; one Jaelyn Montgomery knew all too well. After dating every loser residing in LA, she was ready to give up. No longer did she wish to subject herself to relationships with no barrier, until her sister decided to take her dating problems in a new direction. Cyber dating. Little did she know the path she was embarking on, until a deep, dark, secret unveils itself from the world of cyber lust. Hot, steamy words, are exchanged in a triangular relationship that will leave you both hot and bothered.
Relationships change. Trust is questionable. A simple problem, turns into a complex challenge; one Jaelyn’s unsure she can get out of. What do you do when someone you trust is found upon a dating site? How do you fix it? How do you progress? A long time relationship of love and truth is buried deep within the pages of the web.
Will Jaelyn be able to fix what she starts after her discovery? Or has she caused irrevocable damage to someone she loves? Is it true that sometimes things are just better off unknown?
Cyber Lust will leave you wanting more. Can you foreshadow which path Jaelyn will choose to follow after her discovery of dishonesty?
She squirmed as his fingers brushed her midriff and teased her pantyline. His warm hands gently and slowly worked their way below her satin laced underwear. "Yes," his finger penetrated. She felt tight, warm and wet with anticipation. Colin's fingers became lubricated from her excitement. In and out. In and out. Her clit tingled at the sensation his fingers provided. His bulged jeans rubbed up against her leg. She could feel he was ready. The smell of his cologne drove her wild as if it was laced with pheromones. Rain started to pour down upon the window panes. They weren't they only ones that were wet tonight.
Colin moved his way from her breasts to her midriff and down. He traced the outside of the fabric and sent chills down her spine. Jaelyn’s back…
Being surended by people and feeling alone at thé same time is thé worst feeling in thé world and to pretend thé happiness is soo hard :( while falling in love is thé best feeling in thé world i experienced it befor but it ended soo soun when lost him i wanted to kill m'y self cuz leaving for no reason breaks heart soo bad and you ll never want to fall in love again and you can't trust anyone anymoreand why starting something while you know it will end
Wrote this for my creative writing class! Maria and Mary are in the same class. They talk. They like each other.
Unfortunately, my teacher didn't really catch onto that last part for some reason. Either way, gay girls = gr8.