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This is a piece I recently began to develop. I am looking for any and all constructive criticism! Adrian Alabaster is trapped inside his own mind and repressed aggression towards his abusive, alcoholic father; George Alabaster. In the events leading up to George's murder readers bear witness to the abuse and psychological trauma that drives Adrian over the edge. The novel begins with a vague description of the murder then travels inside of Adrian's world from childhood to his thirteenth birthday where all he wishes is for his father to drop dead!