A Dream is a Vision...

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this is a hope. we all need hope. like a dream. something that pushes us. to where we want to be. this is my dream.

A dream is a vision,

something we see,

and somthing we can aspire to be.

My dream makes me smile,

my dream makes my heart pound,

especially when I hear the sound,

of it ringing in my ear,

so near, my dear, I dream.

What is my dream you ask?

Well it is forever in the past,

nearly impossibly but in my heart,

I have hope, that i can cope,

with the fact it may be true,

and if it where to happen my mind would turn blue.

My dream is my hope,

and my hope is my dream,

Can't you see?

It takes faith,

the way I see it,

a dream doesn't come to you,

you have to go get it.

It is coming closer everyday,

the pain seems to melt away.

Dreams aren't just for sleep,

you can have them in life to,

let me proove that to you.

So here my story of a dream,

tommorrows glory.

Submitted: July 16, 2009

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Ahh...I loved this poem.

I've never really looked at, or thought of, a dream from this perspective. A personal heaven. A pleasant place you can go to when times get rough. This is, without a doubt, more people need to read. Just like your "The kind of person you are..", everyone can learn from this. Beautiful!

If any criticisms need to be made (And it kills me to do this), don't forget about the space bar. A few times, you might've forgotten to seperate two words, which makes it a little (?) at times.

But besides that, awesome job!

Sat, August 15th, 2009 5:41am


=] Thank you!

Mon, August 17th, 2009 9:02am


Very Good! Since you semm to do so well with poetry. I invite you to enter my daughters Poetic Poetry Challenge. You'll find it in miscellaneous. Or type in Pumkinspice57. I'm sure she would be happy to have you join.


Tue, August 25th, 2009 7:41pm


Thank you sooo much! To be perfictly honest I was really hoping to get a chance like this. =]

Tue, August 25th, 2009 1:11pm

swedish fish

I liked that one too. I think I'll read more of your poems sometime! You seem to write them pretty well.

Sat, October 24th, 2009 6:50pm



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