Its so hot, but yet I feel so cold,
Whose hands do I have to hold?
I have nobody,
Not one single person,
My feelings are getting worsen.
I am not meant to be left alone,
I need someone there,
But I am not sure anyone is aware,
That my voice is crying,
My heart is slowly dying.
I need love, no more can I go,
Without the feeling of not being able to know,
If I really am loved.
I need love, right now, The secret of the dawn
As we speak,
This is my avow.
Submitted: February 19, 2010
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Great writing can't beleive you are only 13. I loved the line: "Without the feeling of not being able to know,If I really am loved." Very sad but poetic. Keep writing.
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Thanks. :) I'm happy you enjoyed it!
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Wow! I'm so impressed! I love this!!!!
Sun, March 7th, 2010 7:06am
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Thanks alot Giselle!
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... I know how you feel. Great job. You get my vote.
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Thank you.
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Loved it! I can almost relate.
Fri, July 30th, 2010 1:16pm
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haha, good!
-smiles:)
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NazireC
definitely well worthee and well thought out.
Sun, February 28th, 2010 8:48pmImpressed.
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Thanks:)
Sun, February 28th, 2010 3:16pm