It's Love...Its True....

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This is determination...i hope this helps you see your dream. :)

Its a promise I made to myself along time ago,

and now I need to prove, that I can do it so.

Its love, its true, and it reminds me of you.

The way you put your heart out there,

shows me, life is not a scare.

The chemastry betweet you, and him,

helps me see, what I want to be.

The inspiration keeps me going,

my mind keeps me knowing,

of the love I see.

I promise you,

you will see me,



Well, its hard to say.

I believe I can do it.

No matter what,

others say.

I am going, to do it that way. :)

Submitted: August 07, 2009

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nice work loved it sj

Mon, August 10th, 2009 3:38pm


thanks! =] means alot to me!

Mon, August 10th, 2009 2:09pm


I absolutly love it! Keep up the good work. your poems make me want to write poetry but i can only write stories. haha loved it!
~Sammy :)

Mon, August 24th, 2009 11:54pm



Mon, August 24th, 2009 5:32pm

swedish fish

nice. Thanks for the comment you left on my page. I love getting comments. You did sound very inspired in that poem.

Sat, October 24th, 2009 6:44pm


I was. This poem is real to me.

Sat, October 24th, 2009 12:25pm

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