Stabbed Death

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

This person dosn't know where she is, it is dark, she is cut, and stabbed. DEAD!

I don't know where I am. I can't see. It's so dark. WAIT! What was that? Step by step, I hear the scuffiling of my feet. I put my hands out in front of me. Creek Creek. Sqills, piter pater piter pater. A mouse!  I scream. Agian, I put my hands out infront of me.
SHARP! Ouch! My hand, bleeding, a knife? A tree branch?
Agian, what was that?! It's breathing, a person? An animal? I don't know. The steps come closer.
Quick! I turn around! It steps to the side, yup, diffently a person! I hear my heart beating, pounding, is it going to come out of my ears?
 I can't stand it. I run! My feet, going, the shadow of the person, comming closer every second. Trash! Everywhere!
I'm kicking what sounds like metal.
 STOP!
I fell, the shadow is comming closer. tip-toe tip-toe.
The knife slides out, flick, I hear the blade. I close my eyes. STAB!
I'm dead.


Submitted: September 26, 2009

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acedawg

wow, brutal..lol..but good

Mon, September 28th, 2009 2:33pm

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Thanks!

Mon, September 28th, 2009 1:32pm

darkshan98

kinda gore-ish. but it would be better if you corrected some of your punctuation marks and emphasised a little more. i liked it, though. keep up the good work! :3

Wed, June 9th, 2010 10:30pm

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Thanks!

-smiles:)

Thu, June 10th, 2010 1:43am

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