This is the kind of person you are

Poem by: 123

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a good peom...good for everybody...hope it is an inspiration...like melissa gilbert is for me.

Ilook at you

eyes of pacific blue

they shine of beauty,

like they smile,

and make me dream a half a mile.

Your smile lightes upthe room,

like the flowers that bloom.

Your heart is gold

but yet you are never bold.

When someone is sad,

you are the first one there to make them glad.

You have courage like a tiger,

you have had to,

you have had a life all in blue,

You always have a smile on your face,

acting like the problem is far out in space.

You are so loving,

kind,

and when someone needs help

you leave everything behind.

And that is why i love you so,

so much you will never know...

And this is the kind of person you are

no matter how close or how far,

Iwill always love you for who you are.

Submitted: July 16, 2009

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TaylorShaeee

Very beautiful. Try formatting it by capitolizing the first letter and using puncation like commas and periods. Quite a good start.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 1:47am

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Thanks!

Sun, October 11th, 2009 2:16pm

123

Thank you. I will.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 2:51am

SLJONES

a very nice and relaxing poem loved it sj

Tue, August 4th, 2009 10:07pm

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Thanks! gladd you liked it!

Thu, September 24th, 2009 3:40pm

irishman1494

Very nice! I think we could all gain something from a poem like this. Think of it as your role model, you know?

As SJ put it, your poem is 'very nice and relaxing!' I don't know about relaxing (maybe 'mellow' is better...), but it definitely is a nice poem. I like it!

Also, watch out for spacing problems. At a few points in your poem, you might've accidentally forgotten to put a space between two words. Don't let it get to you though, I've seen a lot of people do it (, heck, I've done it before!).

And this is your first poem? Awesome!

Sat, August 15th, 2009 5:34am

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Thanks! I will. I noticed that I did that before I just didn't have time to fix it. =]

Mon, August 17th, 2009 9:00am