What I want to do.....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Read the poem and tell me what you think! =]

What I want to do, depends on you.

You make me cry, everytime I try. to make my dream come true

it makes my heart turn blue.

I'm not going to get to many shots at this, so you better

pull me out of the abyss.

This is what I want to do, please let me try,

I feel as if I'm going to die.

Why can't you believe me?

What does it take for you to see?

I have dreams, more to balance on beams.

So please give me a chance, to proove that I can dance.

A dance of love, a dance of music, listen to my lyrics.

Submitted: August 17, 2009

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swedish fish

that had some nice wording in there. It is hard to get people to give you a chance sometimes. Which is too bad since there is so much talent.

Sat, October 31st, 2009 1:40pm


Haha. Thanks Dearest! Love ya!

Sat, October 31st, 2009 12:40pm

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