The lake - 129Dreams

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
Just a short something i had to write for my schooling hope you enjoy.

Submitted: October 05, 2011

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Please excuse any mistakes i have made in this piece if you want you can point them out and il try to fix them thanks.And i am not sure of the genre for this type of writing if you could correct me thatd be appreciated. =)

Sprinting long frantic strides carry me away from my pursuers unaware of my surroundings I look to my right. A great lake opens before me time stands still as I behold the magnificent sunset lighting the landscape silhouetted hills guard the lake as if they are age old protectors the ripples in the water place me in a trance were every movement in the water induces a great calm. Smells crash into my senses as I finally relax. The smell of weeds on the shore decaying as they are washed upon the shore. I see great trees on the edge of my sight reaching out over the lake as if trying to be one with it there branches hands reaching out but not being taken a hold of. The dying sun sinks lower filtering light through the leaves of the trees and sending slivers of light illuminating the great lake in splendid glory the sun fades leaving the magical lake until a new dawn shall introduce them again I turn and start running cold winds blowing in from the lake they would be close now.

-129Dreams


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