jie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
young jie [heroic] needs dominance, so he battles his kung-fu master, baatarsaikhan [a hero who brings peace]. But the only way to gain respect, this too clumsy boy has to destroy the ancient fire dragon. will he be a cowerd or hero?

Submitted: October 13, 2012

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Jie threw a swift punch, though at age 15 he was doing terriblely at kung fu.He was always falling and slipping like the world floor was made of ice and still, his kung fu teacher always said that Jie should never give up. So he didn't. One slow night, Jie was staying at the training arena later than usual and Baatarsaikhan, his kung fu teacher walked up and said, "Jie, my boy, how are you?"  "Fine." Jie mumbled. then he asked "Sir, If i beat you in a battle, baatarsaikhan, will i earn respect?" "Yes, but..." The old man started. Jie attacked, and Baatarsaikhan easily doged and Jie ran right into a wall. "But,"He continued with a smirk, "You dont need to be stronger to gain respect you could be wise. Like me." Jie frowned "I could kill the old man." He thought, so he ran toward the swords, faster than he has ever had and he.....slipped. He hit his head on the flat dirt floor, and every thing went black. He woke up in the training room exacly were he fell. He stood, And there stood....


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