Jack and Jill

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Literary Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

A Jack and Jill tale.

3/06/09

2sillig01

"Jack and Jill"

Jill told Jack she never cheated

Words to Jack were now depleted

"Evidence, evidence" Jack repeated

Jill confessed to Jack instead

Jack flipped a switch "I could never trust you"

So he shot Jill with a 5 round Ruger 10/22

So Jack without Jill went up a hill

To find a magic mushroom

Jack felt sick, what shroom did he pick

And he came to his final doom

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Submitted: February 06, 2009

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guff01

Such a charming variation of a classic. Have this version put in those fairy tale books. Very original and bold

Fri, February 6th, 2009 5:50pm

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Well thank you lol.

Fri, February 6th, 2009 11:46am

aria aiedail

dude, reminds me kinda of romeo and juliet, they both die ^.^
this world has to many happy endings!!!

Sat, February 7th, 2009 9:10pm

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Haha Romeo and Juliet died because of love, Jack and Jill died because of anger and stupidity/misfortune lol. Thanks for the feedback

Sat, February 7th, 2009 4:08pm

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