WOULD YOU MARRY ME

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its about time you make that choice between who you want to keep as an ordinary friend and the one you want as a life time friend (wife). It's time to ask her the biggest question of your life. It's time to ask would you love to be my wife.

You've killed my loneliness with your smile

You've captured my heart with your eyes

Why will I want to jump into the Nile

Knowing fully well I have you by my side

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I see no darkness in my life

Ever since you brought your love to shine its light

No need to go on an aircraft to get high

Cos your love has given me wings to fly

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You're my voice when I cry

You're my face when I smile

You've given me a reason to survive

If must have you then I must fight

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As every minute passes by

I see new reason why I don't want to be a passerby

Want you like every second of the time

Want you like every sucking child

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You've been there with me down the line

Even when it goes wrong all the time

A strong pillar holding me tight

An source of inspiration to mankind

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No time to say no time

No time to wait for another time

You've stayed too long by my side

Just one question to ask, would you be my wife?

 

Written By: Peter Excel


Submitted: August 26, 2013

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glitter snow426

oh, love it love it!! Sooooooo heartwarming tender and sweet WONDERFUL, I will give you ten plus, awesome work!!

Mon, August 26th, 2013 4:54pm

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Thanks so much, and I'm glad u appreciate it a lot.

Mon, August 26th, 2013 11:11am

Chantelle Nazareth

Lovely poem,

you are a very deep writer

one who expresses through work

this one is so warm and flowing.

keep up the great work

xx

Wed, August 28th, 2013 2:50pm

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Thanks a lot. I appreciate you and I'm glad to hear you say this about my poems. God bless you.

Wed, August 28th, 2013 8:01am

DLCannon

Sounds perfect. Nice detail into it. Hope she said "yes!"

Fri, September 27th, 2013 4:47pm

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Smiles* (yeah) she did, actually wrote it for a friend who proposed to his long time girl friend.
Thanks for stopping by. Glad you like it.

Fri, September 27th, 2013 10:04am

Desilu

Well,Peter,I hope she says yes.
A truly romantic poem,full of love.
Good writing.
Dee.

Sat, September 28th, 2013 12:53pm

Author
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Smiles*
I wrote it for a friend, who proposed to his long time girlfriend, and she said yes. Glad you stopped by. Thanks Dee

Sat, September 28th, 2013 9:54pm

bobthebuilder

Wonderful expressions of loving sentiments. Very romantic.

Sun, September 29th, 2013 2:56pm

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thanks a lot, glad you stopped by.

Sun, September 29th, 2013 10:35am

quiet dreamer

this is a romantic poem :) Happy, that the woman said yes ;) beautiful.

Fri, October 4th, 2013 12:27pm

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Smiles*
Thanks for the encouragement.
Glad you like it.

Fri, October 4th, 2013 5:39am

deathpearl

Aww~ that's like the sweetest poem ever. I love it when a guy has a way with words. I don't expect u to read my work. I m glad that I got to read this cute work of urs. Many smiles

Sun, October 6th, 2013 7:10am

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Thanks for your kind and sweet words.

Sun, October 6th, 2013 5:32am

Haley Lynn Thomas

This made me smile! it's so romantic and such a unique way to propose! Beautifully written!

Tue, October 29th, 2013 11:55am

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Thanks a lot.

Tue, October 29th, 2013 9:05pm

JoelatRpg

Such a romantic poem! It's very positive and uplifting, and hopeful. Thanks for sharing:)

Fri, November 1st, 2013 1:01am

Author
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I'm glad you like it, thanks for the beautiful comment.

Fri, November 1st, 2013 1:29am

Nabila

Amazing

Wed, November 13th, 2013 11:47am

Author
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Thanks

Wed, November 13th, 2013 6:35am

Sk2093

Aw such a beautiful poem and happy she said yes. Nicely written :) - Sk2093

Fri, December 27th, 2013 12:24pm

Author
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Fri, December 27th, 2013 10:54pm

Lisa Ayers

You are a great wordsmith. This is beautiful!

Mon, December 30th, 2013 4:38am

Author
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Thanks, really appreciate you Lisa.

Sun, December 29th, 2013 8:45pm

Alyn King

Nice job, Peter.

Thu, January 16th, 2014 8:08pm

Author
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Thanks a bunch!
Appreciate.

Thu, January 16th, 2014 10:58pm

Teach

Very deep and romantic. Lovely ...she would have to say yes.

Sun, January 19th, 2014 7:43am

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Smiles*
Thanks a bunch, glad you like it.

Sun, January 19th, 2014 11:19am

james rinvil

A proposition like that i need to use when im on my knees asking her to carry my last name lol

Sun, January 19th, 2014 2:37pm

Author
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Smile, I dig it.
Thanks for stopping by.

Sun, January 19th, 2014 11:11am

amour

deep and lovely

Fri, January 24th, 2014 1:13am

Author
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Thanks a bunch!

Thu, January 23rd, 2014 5:28pm

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