Stop Smiling You're Dying

Poem by: A Black Sage

Summary

Today I have heard a form a music I have never heard before. Deathcore Metal. At first I liked it but after 5 minutes of listening to it, now I hate it but it did give me an idea for a song.

This will be the very first song I will write and probably my last until I hone my writing skills. This is a test so please feel free to comment. And don't worry about holding back with the criticism if you hate or like, all I ask is for honest feedback, the song will be in the style of Deathcore Metal so just imagining i'm screaming these lyrics at you.sso if its in all caps i'm not being rude.

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Submitted: April 17, 2013

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WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  WHY ARE YOU SMILING !!!!!!!

YOU DAMNED ROTTING CORPSE

YOU SHOULD BE SOBBING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU STINK OF DECAY BUT YOU PRAY EVERYDAY TO WHAT?!

YOU WOULDN'T BE WHERE YOU ARE TODAY

IF HE EVEN GAVE A FUCK !!!!!!!!!

 

WWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! WHY ARE YOU SMILING!!!!!!!!

YOU'RE DEAD !!!!!!!!!(WHISPERS OF 666)

I SAW YOU SQUIRMING ON YOUR DEATH BED

AS THE DEATH DEMON SCYTHED YOUR HEAD!!!!!!!

NOW I'M FILLED WITH HATE DREAD

BECAUSE I WANTED YOU ALIVE BUT I WAS FREE WHEN YOU WERE DEAD

NOW YOU'VE COME BACK JUST TO BURDEN ME

WITH YOUR SICK SOUL(SATAN LAUGHS!)

NOW YOU WILL NEVER LET MEEEEE BEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

 

(4x) I CAN'T TAKE THIS !(I AM RUNNING!)

I CAN'T TAKE  THIS!(I AM SCREAMING!)

I CAN'T TAKE THIS !(MY EYES ARE BLEEDING)

I CAN'T TAKE THIS(MY BODY IS SO WEARY ITS DYING!)

 

STOP SMILING (THIS IS SICK!)

STOP SMILING  STOP SMILING STOP SMILING YOU BITCH !!!!!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

FUCK, BLOOD SUCK, WE ALL HAVE SOLD OUR SOULS FOR A BUCK!!!!

DEATH ,RED, DECAY, HELL YOU'RE ALL GHOST IN A SHELL

BECAUSE I FUCKED LUCIFER'S WIFE AND BECAME THE NEW PRINCE OF HELL

INSANE(HAHAHAHA) LET'S PLAY THE BLAME GAME

WHEN I'M THOUGH YOU'LL KNOW MY NAME!!!!!!!!!!!

BLEEDING

COLD

WHERE AM I ?

WHAT WAS I ?

WHAT DID I BECOME?

MY CHEST FEELS SO HOLLOW

I FEEL SO NUMB?

SO LOST YET IN SO MUCH AGONY

I FEEL LIKE I KNOW WHERE I'M GOING

AND THE THESE VOICES CALLING ME !!!!!!!

 

WHERE AM I? WHERE AM I ? WHERE AM I I?!!!!!!!!!! DON'T YOU HEAR ME ?!!!!!!!!!

WHICH THE FUCK IS THIS JAIL OR HELL ?

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Today I have heard a form a music I have never heard before. Deathcore Metal. At first I liked it but after 5 minutes of listening to it, now I hate it but it did give me an idea for a song.

This will be the very first song I will write and probably my last until I hone my writing skills. This is a test so please feel free to comment. And don't worry about holding back with the criticism if you hate or like, all I ask is for honest feedback, the song will be in the style of Deathcore Metal so just imagining i'm screaming these lyrics at you.sso if its in all caps i'm not being rude.
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