The Fallen-Still Palace, Part 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is a short story I am working on at the moment, and I would appreciate any comments as I'm not quite sure if it's good enough. I'm not a native English speaker, so I'd also be happy about grammar corrections, in case you find any mistakes in it. Still I hope you'll find it an enjoyable read.

The story centers around a disturbing palace and its princess in a hypothetical, dark world, and tells about strange -- later on supernatural -- events taking place around the palace.

This is only the first half of the story, the second part is about to be written, but already at this point I'd be happy about any sort of feedback. :)

Submitted: January 10, 2012

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