Rising from Despair

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Just aa very short peom about rising and hope that just came to me :)..

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Hope Shatters,

 Despair Fills the Air like Poison,

You Breath in to Live and

 Everyday becomes a Needed Agony.



Shattered Hope is Pieced Together,

 A Cure Arises to Erase the Poison and

 Every Breath becomes Sweat and Loses its Agony.

 The Days are Quite Ringing with a Peaceful Tone

 

 


Submitted: August 02, 2012

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Aadam

Thu, August 2nd, 2012 5:01am

angel plant

Now that is good and so very true. We all have hope and can use it every day to rise from despair. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Short and simple.

Thu, August 2nd, 2012 6:27am

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Thank you :). Youve made me a very happy person because of that wonderful messege but also because you are the first person to comment on anything I've published :). Arigato .

Wed, August 1st, 2012 11:49pm

Rensea Dasners

this is again another great poem and i know what you mean by slowly the despair fades away. xxx

Thu, August 30th, 2012 9:40am

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Thanks, this poem in one of my favourites

Thu, August 30th, 2012 6:03am

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