Good ending

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

Man, mosque, Death, soul, Allah, good ending.

Good Ending!!!

A man entered the mosque for Subh prayer. He did not know that he would meet his death that very early morning. He prayed two Rakaat of Alfajr due to the official prayer of Subh. Then, he sat with his legs wrapped, waiting the establishment of Subh prayer. Just few minutes before establishing the prayer, he felt something bad inside. He could hardly breathe! His soul began leaving the body in which it had established for years. Worshippers saw him breathing hardly; they jumped into their feet and went to see if he was all fine. When they drew near him, they asked him, “Are you fine” “I feel I am not fine. I feel something bad inside,” he said asking them to notify his family about his stituation.

Unfortunately, in few seconds, he left this world to join the hereafter after uttering his last words “There is no god but Allah and Mohamed is his prophet” His situation made him a good envy of all the worshippers who were, around him, reiterating, “He is a good man because he had met Allah worshipping him in his holly place” they added saying, “Allah blessed him a good ending”.

Those worshippers finally wished they had good ending like this man had had!

Submitted: December 14, 2014

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Raashed Ramzan


Sun, December 14th, 2014 4:11pm


Dear Ramzan,

It gives me pleasure to hear that from you, and I thank you for liking it.

Sun, December 14th, 2014 8:35am

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