Moments of Death

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This poem had been a really nice poem for many examples of different personalities. I am trying to display how the spirits of the human beings ends when someone comes and grab it from your heart.

Submitted: May 15, 2010

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Moments of Death

 

 

Broken glass

Mixed up and sharp

In many shapes and angles

So pointed, so hard

Never die

Until the sun light appear again and again

 

Full of blood when it’s gloomy and dark

Inside No birds, no kites are alive

Never been lonely when it says

Your god has your time now unless you rise high

That glass is light

 

The pain shaking the body

In many twilights of grey and white

Seen the moment

Cried so loud

Painful in red

Created through the sunset color

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Poem Meaning:

 

This poem had been a really nice poem for many examples of different personalities. I am trying to display how the spirits of the human beings ends when someone comes and grab it from your heart. The time you die, it’s not easy, you have to think about everything bad you’ve done before and beg god to forgive you. Displaying death is a very hard thing to explain but if you can feel it next to each good person, it is easy. The time you die your shadow split, the moment your blood stare at death. A broken glass is the heart and it has many pains from different types of sizes. So pointed so hard express how hard was that person displaying the pain the he gets. Never die is a thing for pain when you really die if you were a bad person. Until the sunlight appear again and again means that if the people loved you and felt good about you, god may forgive you for whatever you cracked. Full of blood when it’s gloomy and dark, here I am giving a very important lesson, here I show how the heart is full of blood, but not a normal blood, it’s thick and heavy from the weight of the bad actions. Inside no birds no kites are alive shows how the bless is not there, no birds, no heaven, no kites, no happiness in your spirit when it goes up to your god. Never been lonely when it says your god has your time now unless you rise high, here again gives you another warning of bad stuff. That glass is light it means if you do the right thing you’ll go to heaven. The pain shaking the body, how pain is, you’ll know, it’s a very painful pain; the phrase warns you again that hell is hard and tight with fire. In many twilights of grey and white, here I show how the spirit is moving to the second world, this imaginary appears to you and me when we both die, how your eyes look at the place your last moments end, it shake a lot and then close forever. Seen the moments means how your last moments are seen and how do they affect you in your first world. Cried so loud, this is the time you go and your last voice cries. Painful in red and created in the sunset color, here where your spirit flies and disappear within the sunset color for those who made many mistakes that cause them hell at the end, but I am sure all of us will go to heaven if we know what are we saying and what things were doing.

 

 

Thankfully yours

 


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