Two Young Lovers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Two young lovers together for the first time!

Two young lovers walking down the street, it’s late and they have had a wonderful night. This is the moment, the first time.Our young man is very nervous, not wanting to mess up. He walks her up to her door and she turns around and gives him that look that she has found the man of her dreams. He swallows, then smiles and leans in for a kiss that will be remembered for a life time. She has accepted this man for everything he is and wants to be. After the kiss the two lovers go inside and begin their life. She guides him to the bedroom and sits him down on the bed. She turns and puts on some music, nothing slow, and something a little faster, with a seductive feel, “Mr. Brightside”. It’s odd to have the song playing, even though it is about something other than what they are experiencing it is still a good song.

She begins to move with the music, he stands and takes her by the shoulders and begins kissing her forehead, her neck, her shoulders and across her collar bone. She throws her head back in ecstasy, he slips her right shoulder strap off and kisses the trail as it falls off.She giggles as he kisses her arm. He then kisses his way back up to her shoulder and then her neck. Nothing is said. He knows this woman is everything he has ever wanted and now that he has her, he wants to give her pleasures she has never felt.

The smell of her skin drives him crazy; it is the sweet smell of peaches, with a hint of perfume. Her eyes are that of an angel, one who would seem to be able to make everything better. Her lips were full, she wore a red lipstick not too deep and not to bright something soft and her hair smelt of cucumber melon, his favorite. He pushes the other strap of her dress off her shoulder and it falls to the floor. Her body was that of a Goddess, she wore a matching yellow lace bra and panty set. The color complimented her golden skin.

He knew he had to take control to ensure he would not mess this up. He wrapped his arms around her and spun around falling on the bed. Her hair flung as he whipped his love around and softly they landed on the bed. He began to run his fingers from her lips down to her navel, softly caressing her skin. He followed the finger touches with soft kisses. When he got down to her thighs she quivered with excitement. As he kissed her body he caressed with his hands. Unbeknownst to him, the light touches drove her to another place, a place that was filled with pleasure.

What was going through the two lovers minds as the shared this intimate moment? Her future flashed before her eyes, the life they could have together, the exciting nights alone, the many adventures they would go on and of course the family. He was thinking only about now, wanting to pleasure this woman, who had stolen his heart. A typical man not thinking past the present, he knew he would be able to fulfill his promises to her. Tonight was now, and the only thing he needed to fulfill at this moment was their need for pleasure…

Submitted: May 30, 2009

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This was very good. :)
I like it a lot.
Incredibly descriptive, and very sweet.


Sat, May 30th, 2009 9:23pm


This was so sweet! I loved it! The descriptions and imagry... Also, the characters! They need no real identity for me or anyone else to relate to it. I liked it so much!!

Sat, March 29th, 2014 1:39am


Interesting story

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