MY INCREDIBLE INDIA

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

A true depiction of my land and our incredible cultural journey in the heart of any traveler. Love to read this again. :)

Love traveling across one unbelievable destination,

INDIA is beyond any incredible dream,

For endless end of an artist's lividity,

You are always our guest,

In HER cultural heritage contributors scent momentous diversity,

All the way you travel in this fortress,

Your carpet liberalise uprising morning sun,

Like a mountainer sparsing intimacy in the Himalayas,

One glider spread biography of letters life in HER fingernails,

Every stranger labour spurious meeting place in Taj Mahal,

Those traders who came in search of the land of spices,

We tell another incredible story rowing this domesticity,

As waves knot faithful affair on its river flow,

Those visitors who love the enchantment Ayurveda,

A wind bag travel with them along merriment nectar of coconut tree,

There is a houseboat through magic medic valley of Kashmir,

We row its meshwork fishing on horse ride along ocean terrains,

One confided breath across Ganga waters devote our vastitude,

In those temple shrines artisians carve monument time stood the test,

We worship sanctity of those sacret happiness in every living narrative story,

Living on those biodiversity our demographics flavour the culture of INDIA,

With promising art and architecture of our society,

The spirit of unity unites our symmetry in sports, clothing and spiritual quest,

Today we champaign an emerging economy,

For par level with tender reach of foreign relations and military,

We respect every jawans who watch our borders,

Safeguarding good will for the people of INDIA,

For every farmer who reap harvest,

For every handloom store keeper who credit fruits of weavers labour,

For all art within every teacher's life devoted in making an INDIAN dream,

For those artists who leave back count in our big screen,

For our family values where HISTORY makes its tribute,

For the statesman who are midst for the constitution they uphold,

Life with every INDIAN is an endless journey,

This is my humble village,

Where we cherish integrity with respect of a human family together,

Be proud of being an INDIAN,

Jai Hind


Submitted: December 16, 2014

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artie1947

this is good, but could you not turn the size of the writing down, it over shadows the point of the story you are trying to get over.

Wed, September 25th, 2013 8:04pm

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I will do the necessary compilation very soon. Thanks for your appreciation. :)

Thu, September 26th, 2013 1:04am

ashcon94

this was really good. I didn't see anything wrong with it. I really think people who value their culture are honest and they can make experiencing life fun.

Thu, September 26th, 2013 4:59am

Author
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Thanks for the timely note. :)

Thu, September 26th, 2013 1:03am

CZR

This is a fair depiction of India. I rather you talk more about Indian traditional practices or craft, cuisine (Curry) and religion (Sikhism, Hinduism?) though. These are the crucial that truly defines your culture after all. Do not be afraid to use Indian terminology as it will make your work sound more authentic. Good Piece!

Fri, October 11th, 2013 10:12am

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Your noteworthy comment is appreciable. I will draft this contribution ahead. Thanks once again. :)

Fri, October 11th, 2013 7:26am

Madhu Baglari

This is beautiful. I loved how you framed the rich culture of the country into a poem. Proud to be an Indian! :)

Mon, June 16th, 2014 8:55am

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