WHAT I MISS IS HARD TO SAY IN ONE WORD
THERE ARE MANY THINGS, THE SUMMER BREEZE, THE PRETTY BIRDS
THE ROWS OF GRAIN THAT LOOK LIKE GOLD
DOGWOODS THAT GROW AND ROSES THAT UNFOLD
PEACH TREES THAT SPREAD FOR MILES AND MILES
FOR PLANT LIFE THAT COMES IN MANY DIFFERENT STYLES
THE FRIENDLY SMILES FOR NO REASON AT ALL
FOR PEOPLE WHO LOVE YOU AND MEAN IT WHEN THEY CALL
ALL OVER YOU WILL BE ABLE TO TELL
FROM SAVANNAH TO THE ATL
THAT PEOPLE FROM THERE
FOR OTHERS THEY DO CARE
SO REMEMBER THIS I HAVE TOLD YA
IT IS ABOUT MY HOMELAND, MY BELOVED GEORGIA
Submitted: September 06, 2009
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Oh this was beautiful and touching :D I loved it! Haha and the music was a nice touch. The rhyming was amazing.
This poem painted a clear picture in my head.
Good work!
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thank you
Mon, September 7th, 2009 4:10am
Oh my goodness I don't know what happenend. It like crazily multiplied! :O You should erase them! haha
Sun, September 6th, 2009 4:25pm
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lol i will thank you
There ya have it folks, Georgia stays on your mind, no matter where ya are.
Is be in India once, started singing this song.Some botty lukd at my as I be crazed.
Damn, foreigner thought I's is singing about a woman.
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lol
Mon, September 7th, 2009 4:10am
Very nice, the added ray charlse was a good touch.
Mon, September 7th, 2009 11:15pm
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thank you
Mon, September 7th, 2009 9:41pm
Pretty good, I also liked the added song by Mr. Ray. I also appreciated your comment on my poem. Keep up the writing, "Cause a writer, writes".
Tue, September 8th, 2009 1:01am
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lol thank you
Mon, September 7th, 2009 9:42pm
Good and ade e to think to the home at this moment
thanks
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np thank you
Tue, September 8th, 2009 5:42am
the best peom i have read yet georgia seems so beautiful really wanna visit it one day
Thu, September 10th, 2009 11:15pm
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it is gorgeous
Thu, September 10th, 2009 4:16pm
Very nice poem indeed. It is nice to be home isn't it? I have always wanted to visit Georgia. I hear it is quite nice. I live in Texas and I am dying to run away to N. Carolina in the fall. I am sure Georgia is beautiful in the fall as well. Great piece.
Sat, September 12th, 2009 3:35pm
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North Carolina is awesome, come visit us, you hear..lol
Sat, September 12th, 2009 8:42am
Very good descriptive words and I can almost picture Georgia in my head.
You are so lucky that your words can rhyme. Rhyming is so hard that's why I don't really write rhyming poems. But you make it look easy.
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lol thanks a lot
Tue, September 29th, 2009 5:44am
Deploy then get back to me on missing the homeland.
sorry but at least Ohio is still in the Us.
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georgia is too
Wed, September 30th, 2009 2:06pm
A very sweet write. I can relate to this when I have been away from home. I live in Kentucky and Gary and I travel sometimes. I am never really happy till we hit the Ky state line. Love this.
Susan
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thank you lots
Mon, October 12th, 2009 4:07pmFacebook Comments
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Oh this was beautiful and touching :D I loved it! Haha and the music was a nice touch. The rhyming was amazing.
Sun, September 6th, 2009 4:08pmThis poem painted a clear picture in my head.
Good work!
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thank you
Sun, September 6th, 2009 9:15am