Crackles In My Heart (Short Poem)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Me fooling around.

Crackles in my heart, my heart is tearing
No love for me, my love is caring
Caring for the intense break down
That shook down to cracks and intense packs of crying every night
Just from all the pain and suffering of my lost and gains
My joys and pains
My winds and rains
My highway road and my 2-way lanes
Of self-destruction of no suicidal thoughts
In which my anger has taken over and brought
The selfishness of you jerks and heart breaking clerks
Of no joy, and self minding destroy
To the ones who said they loved me and the false decoys
Of the truth which is no truth to the fruit of my happiness
Which you came to rot and foil my plans of making it
Making myself happy once more after the pain and suffering
No loading in my life because my heart is still buffering
My heart shatters with my hopes and dreams
You all had a scheme, all planning for a plot
Taking every bit of love I had down to the very last drop

Copyright © 2012 by Acie Anderson


Submitted: April 23, 2012

© Copyright 2022 Acie Anderson. All rights reserved.

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5Forever23His10Fan

"My joys and pains
My winds and rains
My highway road and my 2-way lanes" I love those lines... they flow perfectly :) I do love this poem... I just wanted to share my favorite lines with you :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 5:58am

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Thank you very much :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 8:46pm

AninaKat2012

Love it!!! :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 9:21pm

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Thank you very much :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 8:45pm

mariamhanif

amazing poetry

Fri, April 27th, 2012 2:07pm

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Thank you very much :)

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:40pm

lapu shingle

Top draw well put nice flow keep it up

Visit my poems if you get chance

Sat, April 28th, 2012 5:31pm

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Thank you much and will do

Sat, April 28th, 2012 11:59am

RealWriter1092

it was really good

Sat, April 28th, 2012 8:31pm

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Thank you very much :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 3:00pm

funnygirl321

Thats really good i luv the rhyming & the flooow :)

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 12:32am

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Thank you very much :)

Tue, May 1st, 2012 6:19pm

yeya620

this is the 2nd best poem because my friend rocky the twilight geek is better no offense though sorry if it may have sounded bad really good though

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 1:40am

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Well uh, I don't understand what's the point of your comment because I didn't even know rocky made a poem called "Crackles In My Heart" but uh.... Thanks for uh... Reading my poem... I guess?... Lol

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 7:04pm

yeya620

yah about that i really dont make sense alot sorrty and whem i talk about rocky stuff im talking about THE LOVE POEM!LOL

IM HAPPY YOU HAVE MY FRIEND HAPPY TOO!

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 2:16am

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Oh... Well why didn't you just read one of my love poems instead of my heart breaking poem? Of course a love poem will always be better than a heart breaking poem lol and thank you very much :)

Wed, May 2nd, 2012 7:21pm

InkSplodges

I actually think this is amazing.... well done :)

Fri, May 4th, 2012 12:39am

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Thank you very much :)

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 5:49pm

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