No job, No money
No bees, No honey
No bed, No sleep
No sun, No heat
No water, No rain
No hurt, No pain
No nightmares, No fears
No sad, No tears
No wind, No kite
No teeth, No bite
No chair, No sit
No arms, No hit
No mind, No thoughts
No gun, No shots
No me, No you
No lie, No true
No husband, No wife
No God, No life!!!!
Submitted: February 16, 2012
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I love this last line.... great job :) I also love the words you used :)
Thu, February 16th, 2012 6:02pm
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Thank you very much :)
Thu, February 16th, 2012 10:13am
I agree with the last line...
Nice work on the poem. =)
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Thank you very much :)
Thu, February 16th, 2012 7:29pm
truly one glowing light, Wow, a lot of NO and this is WONDERFULLY TOLD!!
Sat, February 18th, 2012 1:28am
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Thank you!
Fri, February 17th, 2012 5:51pm
Great poem! Liked your other poems too. But this one's a gem.
Sat, February 18th, 2012 1:30pm
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Thank you so much!
Sat, February 18th, 2012 9:20am
Loved it ! U kept it short and simple ;)
Mon, February 20th, 2012 4:19am
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Thank you very much :)
Mon, February 20th, 2012 1:34am
All the statments of which you made are beyond wonderful, though it was short, and a little on the vage side I felt it, with every line my heart raced, vary enjoyable
Mon, February 20th, 2012 1:34pm
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Thank you very much :)
Mon, February 20th, 2012 12:06pm
No arms, no hugs
But, it's your poem and you're sticking to it.
Great job.
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Thank you! and yes thats a good one
Mon, February 20th, 2012 12:10pm
there is nothing sweeter when love meets the eye
It is true :) I like it a lot Acie keep it up *smiles*
Tue, February 21st, 2012 5:10pm
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Thank you so much :)
Tue, February 21st, 2012 11:04am
I like the rhyme in this poem a lot. It's got a nice ring to it. Also, I like the action-consequence lesson presented so simply and nicely in this poem. You couldn't have put it any better!
:)
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Well thank you very much :)
Tue, February 21st, 2012 11:00pm
i love it...very good
Sat, March 3rd, 2012 11:29am
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Thank you very much :)
Sat, March 3rd, 2012 9:14am
this is good :)
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Thank you very much :)
Thu, March 8th, 2012 10:45am
I was waiting for when it came at the end, for where it was going and it came in that last line. Just that one lines sums the rest up all so nicely. I enjoyed reading the comparisons, they were all really good and the rhyme gave it the needed flow.
Fri, June 8th, 2012 1:59am
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Well thank you so much.
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EmmaElizabethHall
Very nice! I enjoyed reading this one :) Great job Acie!
Thu, February 16th, 2012 1:31pm-Emma.
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Thank you very much Emma! :)
Thu, February 16th, 2012 10:12am