R.I.P Gumdrop

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A death

You heard of yellow snow,but this time it was red
For the girl we all loved and knew,tonight we found her dead
She was a special person and she loved us all
She always had her hands out just in case we fall

Amazing she was and her heart was so true
It was like she was my family because she was part of my crew
On December 4th,2009,her life came to a tragic flop
We will always love you,Rest In Peace Jenny a.k.a Gumdrop


Submitted: January 22, 2012

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5Forever23His10Fan

I think that is really cool that you include her date. You can tell that she meant a lot to you. That makes it more genuwine and from the heart. Good job :)

Sun, January 22nd, 2012 11:21pm

coolkatz0

i am so sorry for you loss, this is really good (the poem, not your loss, thats terrible) great job

Sat, February 4th, 2012 2:01pm

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Yes I know what you meant and thank you. Glad you liked it.

Sat, February 4th, 2012 8:46am

DavinaLynn

I like this.. I really do.
I'm sorry that she had to pass away for you to write such an amazing poem, But I'm touched that you would do this for her.
You really are a good guy, Keep up the good work.
-Becky

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 4:50pm

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Thank you very much! It means a lot to me.

Wed, February 22nd, 2012 1:45pm

mburt0n222_22

Sorry for your loss,I don't know why but this makes me
Happy and sad at the same time

Wed, February 29th, 2012 2:20am

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It's ok, and yeah, I've been told this creates mixed emotions lol

Tue, February 28th, 2012 10:47pm

amnehquti

that was sweet

Fri, April 13th, 2012 9:50pm

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Thank you very much :)

Fri, April 13th, 2012 2:58pm

Pinkygirl101

I'm sure Gumdrop is very happy right now. One way to deal with pain and loss is to create art, and that is exactly what you have done. Great work and I'm sorry for your loss. I can tell you loved her greatly!

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:51pm

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Yes, I know she's happy. And yes, when I'm upset I just mainly write about it. And yes, I loved her deeply and it's ok.

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:47pm

Insane Membrane

a cute tribute she must have a happy caring person when alive

Mon, June 25th, 2012 4:05am

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Thank you and yes, indeed she was a great person

Sun, June 24th, 2012 10:29pm

Seffire

I am sorry for your lose and i like your style of expressing yourself very much

Fri, July 20th, 2012 9:45pm

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It's ok and thank you very much.

Fri, July 20th, 2012 5:22pm

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