To Whom I am Writing This Too (Part 1)
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Poem by: Acie Anderson
I can't express how I am feeling, but you made me upset
The poem is called "To Whom I Am Writing This Too", but who? You would never have guessed
That you have filled me with dispare and regret
For the lies and hurt you gave me, disrespect and neglect
Orignally the heart breaks in two, but with you, mine broke in pieces
For the thought process of this logic, there is no logical thesis
Disparity, declarity, imparity, and never really there for me
In my ears I hear her voice but in my heart I see the lies of she
She wanted my heart, but in her hand I just wasnt fitting
There is more to the story, but for right now I am quitting
To Be Continued....
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This poem has a lot of strangth to it. It is very powerful, with a lot of depth. It really speaks to me and I think other people could relate to it too. It is an amazing poem with a very strong impact. Well done :)
read pt 2 first...but this is a great poem
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Thank you very much!
Wow! There is talent behind the gift. I can really relate... You know it you change the her to him. But yeah, this is a WONDERFUL poem.
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Thank you so much!
this made me cry but i still love your work i will keep an eye out for your name in lights ^_^ i bet your going to be famous with your wonderful poetry.
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Aww your gonna make me cry... But thank you so much :) I am so glad your loving my poems :) I can honestly say... I think your my number one fan.
It almost sounds like something you would rap. Great poem :)
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Maybe I should try to rap it and thank you :)
this is really good!! i wish my poems were as good as this!!im off to read the second part ;D
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Thank you and ok ;D
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