To Whom I am Writing This Too (Part 1)

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A broken heart

I can't express how I am feeling, but you made me upset
The poem is called "To Whom I Am Writing This Too", but who? You would never have guessed
That you have filled me with dispare and regret
For the lies and hurt you gave me, disrespect and neglect
Orignally the heart breaks in two, but with you, mine broke in pieces
For the thought process of this logic, there is no logical thesis
Disparity, declarity, imparity, and never really there for me
In my ears I hear her voice but in my heart I see the lies of she
She wanted my heart, but in her hand I just wasnt fitting
There is more to the story, but for right now I am quitting


To Be Continued....

Submitted: January 24, 2012

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This poem has a lot of strangth to it. It is very powerful, with a lot of depth. It really speaks to me and I think other people could relate to it too. It is an amazing poem with a very strong impact. Well done :)

Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:17pm


read pt 2 first...but this is a great poem

Thu, January 26th, 2012 12:44pm


Thank you very much!

Thu, January 26th, 2012 11:41am


Wow! There is talent behind the gift. I can really relate... You know it you change the her to him. But yeah, this is a WONDERFUL poem.

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:37pm


Thank you so much!

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 1:42pm


this made me cry but i still love your work i will keep an eye out for your name in lights ^_^ i bet your going to be famous with your wonderful poetry.

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 11:00pm


Aww your gonna make me cry... But thank you so much :) I am so glad your loving my poems :) I can honestly say... I think your my number one fan.

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 3:19pm


It almost sounds like something you would rap. Great poem :)

Sat, February 4th, 2012 3:47am


Maybe I should try to rap it and thank you :)

Fri, February 3rd, 2012 8:05pm


this is really good!! i wish my poems were as good as this!!im off to read the second part ;D

Sat, February 4th, 2012 2:04pm


Thank you and ok ;D

Sat, February 4th, 2012 8:46am

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