To Whom I am Writing This Too (Part 1)
Poem by: Acie Anderson
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I can't express how I am feeling, but you made me upset
The poem is called "To Whom I Am Writing This Too", but who? You would never have guessed
That you have filled me with dispare and regret
For the lies and hurt you gave me, disrespect and neglect
Orignally the heart breaks in two, but with you, mine broke in pieces
For the thought process of this logic, there is no logical thesis
Disparity, declarity, imparity, and never really there for me
In my ears I hear her voice but in my heart I see the lies of she
She wanted my heart, but in her hand I just wasnt fitting
There is more to the story, but for right now I am quitting
To Be Continued....
Submitted: January 24, 2012
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Comments
read pt 2 first...but this is a great poem
Thu, January 26th, 2012 12:44pmWow! There is talent behind the gift. I can really relate... You know it you change the her to him. But yeah, this is a WONDERFUL poem.
Fri, February 3rd, 2012 9:37pmthis made me cry but i still love your work i will keep an eye out for your name in lights ^_^ i bet your going to be famous with your wonderful poetry.
Fri, February 3rd, 2012 11:00pmIt almost sounds like something you would rap. Great poem :)
Sat, February 4th, 2012 3:47amthis is really good!! i wish my poems were as good as this!!im off to read the second part ;D
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This poem has a lot of strangth to it. It is very powerful, with a lot of depth. It really speaks to me and I think other people could relate to it too. It is an amazing poem with a very strong impact. Well done :)
Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:17pm