I care about you though...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

well, I guess another broken heart strolling around on this planet=) Someone could have told me...
(sorry in case the Grammer is wrong guys...non native speaker)

You said I should stay, as if it wasI who was leaving

Stay!...then you turned your magnetic back and went away.

You waved me to come back, I've never lost your track

The Big Dipper guided my way

Please, don't go, I'm begging you to stay

I battled the distance, I traveled the time

the heart you drewis burned into my arm

How could you say stay and then go away?

How can you be gone, if you didn't even run?

I've been lying next to you every night in my sleeples dreams

Remember? I fit perfectly into your hand, under your velvety chin

I'm bleeding, my heart has now stretch marks and too much skin

The second hand stopped, the minutes now rest

the only thing I've wanted since then, is you to confess

I was only your substitude person, your commercial break

Why was I so utterly honest and you so damn freaking fake?

You carried me over obstacles, holding me like a treasure, a golden egg

Then you smashed me, you broke my pulsating heart's neck

I saw it in your eyes, my moment of ...I saw me in your eyes, a lying truth?

I miss pulling your hair, your crazy beard

My hands still feel your face, holding it like a shield

You are my red wine, I am so easy to please

I live in my own world, right at the spot you kissed at last

I can't help it, I am superglued to the past

You said it was only the distance but you cared for me

How come I am closer than ever but you don't want to see?

How come it felt like I was everything to you, when in fact, I wasn't even something?

Please, just tell me, I need to stop wondering.

Submitted: July 07, 2009

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Wow . . . that was actually REALLY good. I liked the ending line. :) Wonderful job! :D

Wed, July 8th, 2009 12:47am


yuu shindemura

it's one great poem! really can be felt and has this "unrequited" essence running. good job!

Wed, July 8th, 2009 5:03pm

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