The Worth Of A Girl
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Poem by: Adam Croucher
The Worth of a girl
Her smile brings me such delight
No pain or sorrow
Or fright
Her beatiful eyes shine like the sun
The brightest star in the night
Making me wish i was hers
Glooming happiness to the world
She turns all my thoughts good
And when im with her it just feels right
Like a flower to a garden
She adds Beauty to my life
So i sit here and wonder how she feels
Or what she feels for me is also real
Shes a girl i adore
But most of all...
She is worth waiting for
-Adam Croucher
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Wow! This is soooo beautiful! I wish my bf could write like that. Keep going! :)
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Thanks. idk where this talent comes from but I've been in alot of relationships that turned out to be failures but every now and then i get this warm feeling and i begin to write and my feeling seem to go onto paper and surprisingly it sounds good.
:'D this is Better than good!
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thanks hun. ill be writing more so become a fan plz
become a fan of me cuz im going to write more trust me. i just wrote a new one. not as good as this one but its decent.
it a good poem i like it read mine if you want its a bit short
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thanks
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