The Worth Of A Girl

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem i wrote to a girl that means a lot to me explaining how i felt about wanting to date her.

The Worth of a girl



Her smile brings me such delight
No pain or sorrow
Or fright

Her beatiful eyes shine like the sun
The brightest star in the night
Making me wish i was hers
Glooming happiness to the world

She turns all my thoughts good
And when im with her it just feels right
Like a flower to a garden
She adds Beauty to my life

So i sit here and wonder how she feels
Or what she feels for me is also real
Shes a girl i adore
But most of all...

She is worth waiting for

-Adam Croucher


Submitted: July 24, 2011

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AliCat216

Wow! This is soooo beautiful! I wish my bf could write like that. Keep going! :)

Sun, July 24th, 2011 10:58pm

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Thanks. idk where this talent comes from but I've been in alot of relationships that turned out to be failures but every now and then i get this warm feeling and i begin to write and my feeling seem to go onto paper and surprisingly it sounds good.

Sun, July 24th, 2011 4:08pm

Bella55

:'D this is Better than good!

Mon, July 25th, 2011 12:29am

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thanks hun. ill be writing more so become a fan plz

Sun, July 24th, 2011 5:37pm

Adam Croucher

become a fan of me cuz im going to write more trust me. i just wrote a new one. not as good as this one but its decent.

Mon, July 25th, 2011 12:33am

agatha shelly

it a good poem i like it read mine if you want its a bit short

Mon, July 25th, 2011 12:45am

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thanks

Sun, July 24th, 2011 6:10pm

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