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this is a the first poem id ever written, i was inspired to do so when an English teacher had accused me of being the worst student in her class, evidently she was proved wrong when brought to tears by the work i provided by the end of the class . i hope you all enjoy and leave comments if you can thanks

Submitted: July 09, 2012

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Submitted: July 09, 2012






Long long long and long ago

the deepest river, the deeper it would flow

as the children would play by the river bank

the smell, a stench that was terribly rank


The horse and cart passed by, they did

the blue bottle flies were blown to be rid

the horse and cart passed by with the coal

on the miners set out to accomplish their goal


Deep in the valley, and deep in the scene

the sight of lush long grass how beautifully green

that lovely sweet smell, that brings back old memories

of you as a child running off to pick blackberries


There is only one way to really explain

how much i truly miss that trickling rain

as i am stuck out here with only hot sand grain

i cannot help but wish i was writing this poem on a little welsh train


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