Come to Your Senses

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
The story takes place in a middle school when my character Draven along with Sabrina try to come to grips with Draven's insanity

Submitted: December 02, 2011

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"You ripped my heart out!! you said you would never stop talking to me". "I know but i think we should let go of that". he laughs. "let go!, where are you so can go pick you up". "don'teven come near me, I need to be alone". He grasps the wheel as tight as he can. "Draven just promise me you'll be okay". "Draven". "Draven,answer me"!  He closes his eyes. (crash)! Days pass nobody has heard or spoken to Daven. Days turn into weeks, And she's moved on. "All I evr did was try to save Draven from himself". You hear the double doors slam from afar, And he walks in.

Seeing her with him made Draven sick to his stomach. He walks away swalloing the pills his doctor perscribed to him. He pounches his locker so hard he fractures his knuckles. Draven falls to his knees. A girl standing at the end of the hall runs and helps him up. While picking him up he asks, who are you? "My name is Sabrina, maybe I can help you with your problem".

"People think I'm crazy". "you are not crazy, you just have alot on your mind thats all". "Forget about her". I can't he mumbles. "what"? "I can't"!

"Deap breaths Draven let the crazy get the best of you". "how can you still love someone that has hurt you so much"? "pretend I'm her". "okay" he says. She begins by saying "i never loved you draven, why would I?,you are nothing". "you don"t  mean that" he says. "yes i do". those words keep runing through his head, "you are nothing". screaming he says "I did everything just to make you happy, i'm not crazy, you are just a curse, I hate you"! "Good " sabrina says. Dravens ex  approaches. "do you hear yourself, you sound crazy, you need help". "i don't need help, I have all the help I need,.... I don't love you anymore, IM FREE!!! 

 

 


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