Definition of my Tears

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Tears are the worst companions... They reveal out your pain to the entire world.

The Definition of my Tears


The poisonous snake as traces its way,
Flow down the same way tears in me.
That drop of water burns my face like an acid,
Still no sorrow I depict, my face to be placid.

Like someone knocks on my door with a slaughter,
Telling to God, \"She deserves it... your daughter!\".
And my Lord Himself turns away His eyes,
Cause He can't witness my 'glorious' deathly demise.

My hands folded to pray,
Lips cluttering, so impossible to say.
I stand before my own death,
Not to pray him to go, but beg him to stop my breath.

Urge, I wish it could ne'er be for me to deviate,
But it's the end only, on which I meditate.
They gracefully fall on pages like pearl,
Just to burn a hole, remnant to curl.

How do they find a cave in my eyes,
Homeless they will become after my demise.
So, they flow and drain for freedom they endeavor,
Ere, I cruelly shut their house forever.

Why they tease me, travelling the route of my nose and my lips,
The harbinger of grief, gift me sorrow with grip.
To halt their victorious pilgrimage off my face,
I barricade their way with my hand with a grace.

But do their evilness ever comes to an end?


Submitted: April 19, 2015

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Iamhere

Just amazing

Sun, April 19th, 2015 11:08am

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Thanks friend.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 9:59am

ssrik

Very Touching Poem..Hats off.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 2:53pm

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Thnx friend for such a lovely comment

Sun, April 19th, 2015 10:05am

Angel Lismore

I thought that was amazing, I love how it flows. Keep up the good work, I'll be back soon for more!

Sun, April 19th, 2015 5:20pm

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Yeah. Thanx for reading and for such inspiring comment. :-)

Sun, April 19th, 2015 10:22am

kuigie

Oh my goodness... That is beautiful, the description and your word usage is astounding. I can feel my past tears exactly the way you've described.

I haven't found many who can write like you. Keep it up love!

Sun, April 19th, 2015 9:49pm

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Thank you soooo much. No one has ever described it this way... This makes it even more amazing;-) And I hope your tears now only remain in PAST. Thanks for such a lovely comment, honey.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 3:03pm

Cameron Thompson

Beautifully written. Keep up the good work! :)

Mon, April 20th, 2015 12:33am

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Thnx friend for encouragement.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 6:12pm

Fictiophilia12

Wow! That's amazing.

Mon, April 20th, 2015 12:59am

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Thnx friend...I appreciate that

Sun, April 19th, 2015 6:13pm

Crowefoot

Beautifully written! very powerful!!

Mon, April 20th, 2015 2:16pm

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Glad you liked it. Thnx, friend.

Mon, April 20th, 2015 8:43am

phoenix8

Awesme!each word truly explains the feelings u wanted 2convey!god bless u!

Mon, April 20th, 2015 3:00pm

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Thnx friend. Glad you liked it. Love you too

Mon, April 20th, 2015 8:40am

TheHorizonBetweenUs

This is so amazing. Now I doubt that you're just 16 or not. It was beautifully written and the flow of the poem was Smooth. Loved it. Keep up with the good work, love.

Tue, April 21st, 2015 7:27am

TheHorizonBetweenUs

This is so amazing. Now I doubt that you're just 16 or not. It was beautifully written and the flow of the poem was Smooth. Loved it. Keep up with the good work, love.

Tue, April 21st, 2015 7:27am

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Thank you so much friend. Your words are truly encouraging..

Tue, April 21st, 2015 1:05am

Shahidkhan

Beautifully done...I liked your diction and description in this poem. Well done!

Thu, April 23rd, 2015 1:30am

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I really appreciate it. Thanks :-)

Wed, April 22nd, 2015 6:38pm

DLCannon

I never thought of tears as evil. People need to cry. It's healthier than to not. But liked your rhyme!

Sun, April 26th, 2015 8:04pm

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Yeah your perspective is good too. Though most people hide their tears, pain and it's for them( including me) thnx again for reading :-)

Sun, April 26th, 2015 6:13pm

Veronique Raven

Sweet lil' Adya the more of your writes I come across the more I find how much depth there is to this lovely young soul of yours!You are so far beyond your years my dear friend with your writing...simply lovely.I myself am quite proud of you for the wonderful way you write...beautiful write !Big hugs to you ...:)

Wed, May 20th, 2015 8:42pm

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You are really very generous and lovely. Glad you liked it. Bigger hugs back at you. Love

Wed, May 20th, 2015 1:45pm

ananyags

Wow, what a wondrous Poem! Lots of emotions hidden deep...

Mon, May 25th, 2015 4:59am

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Thanks friend. I really appreciate your kind words. Love

Sun, May 24th, 2015 11:46pm

Smiley113

Reading a couple of your poems and now this one, one thing that I've definitely found out is that- you are an AMAZING WRITER!!! You capture the essence of the scene so well and create wonderful imagery... good rhyming too!
Now that's how it exactly feels when you cry... somehow all the bad memories come rushing into your mind! :( but that's how it is... great work adya- plain amazing!!! :)

Wed, May 27th, 2015 6:06am

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Thanks, friend. I write most of my poems to express myself. It's my passion, not a hobby. So, I wrote this in my bad days.... And I really hope that nooooo bad days come to you ever(so that you can't relate with this :-)) thanks again. Love

Wed, May 27th, 2015 12:00am

Vladislav Raven

Hi Adya, another excellent write from your golden pen. Let the emotion flow from your pen. Tears are my friends, they show that feeling still dwells within me. Your Definition of Tears is a write that comes from deep within the Soul. It amazes me the way you can tap into feelings and bring them out of the reader Adya. May your pen ever run gold and the Soul ever sing.....Vladislav.

Wed, November 11th, 2015 3:25pm

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Thanks, friend for the warm and affectionate comment. Your words are always so inspiring and elating. Love

Wed, November 18th, 2015 5:32am

desi sabun

Dark And sad but overall great
Keep it up

Wed, September 7th, 2016 2:00pm

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Thank you friend for reading. Though, it's 'tears', it had to be sad ;-) Love

Mon, September 12th, 2016 6:17am

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