The abandoned mill

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: War and Military  |  House: Booksie Classic
well i wrote this for a thing in school i got i think a B so i decided to publish it. if u hv any feedbk tell me plez :D p.s be nice i really suck

Submitted: August 24, 2008

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Submitted: August 24, 2008



On a misty winter night
An abandoned mill stood
Eerily alone in an empty world
Chills spreading, brushing past
Emerging from the fog a hunchback creature appears
Creeping, limping, muttering to itself
When it reached the mill it froze
Delivered a screech like nails on a chalkboard
It creaked open the door
It pulled out a single candle
And lit it on a torch
It waddled forward into the dimly lit hall
It blew a cool breath on the wooden floor
The dust cleared and a wolf hatch lay on the floor
He pulled it hard as it exploded open
Dust stinging his eyes
Lit candles in every corner
Surrounding a statue on the wall

The hunchbacked creature shrieked in fear

Then he exploded in a mixture of smoke and fire

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