Poem by: AemmaBella
love, nature, haiku, rose
Submitted: April 22, 2011
Earths divine secret
Bloody, yet soft are thy limbs
That clench thy loves beauté
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I don't know what a haiku is but I love this
Lol thank you
it does sounds like a haiku
not much of a haiku fan either
but it's a great start
simple yet deep
good way of telling the story behind it
YES! Lol I was afraid it wasn't understandable! Thank you so much!
Thanks about my haiku btw.
I really like this. I can picture the snapshot of the rose's beauty through it's thorns. I love the implied comparison and it's symbolism. Well done!
I have another haiku you should check out. I'll be posting a lot soon cause I have them written, I just haven't had the time to post them, lol
i hope you post them soon i love haikus! thank you soo much!
Lovely work. I love your contrast in describing the rose from almost grim to gorgeous. Very nice :)
Thank you :)
Loveity loveity love it! Really like the contrast (as everyone else has said :P) and it's just really well written!
Thank you so so so so so so soooooo much lol :D
This is really good I cannot write Haiku at all, and yes I have tried like a million times this is just WOW. I have no words to express how brilliant this is. :)
It's not that easy lol it took me a good hour to get this just write! Thank you so much ! I'm so glad you like it:)
Sorry but I don't know what a haiku is, but this is really nice big thumbs up d^_^b keep up the good work :D
LOL thank you, I will
This was beautiful, bearing with you on the last syllable. :) I loved the contrast between the soft petals and bloody thorns, and I especially loved the first line. Awesome lead-in to the beauty of the rest of the piece!
Lol thank you you're too kind :) I'm glad you like it!
fanatsic haiku-5 7 5 right? We had to do the same about nature. I did mine about a bird...sucked...unlike yours. This is really good, except the last word beaute-do you pronounce it beauty or something else? Not sure. Anyway, you have talent. XD
It's pronounced beautwa i think (french) and thank you i appreciate your comment :)
it's this lovely!!!! -sings stevie wonder- i gotta get my groove back like the chicken noodle dance
Wow that's random -_- lmao!!
I love it !
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