Poem by: Aerolin
child abuse, sad, scared, escape, class, english, wall, blocks
Submitted: June 02, 2010
© Copyright 2016 Aerolin. All rights reserved.
so sad but I liked it.
thanks it really means a lot :D
dang thats good u should keep working on it so it becomes a long poem but wat would i know but 1 thing i do know is i would absoulutly love 4 u to review mine
thanks, yeah it was meant to be short, but yeah ill check yours out when i get a chance :)
I like the juxtaposition of the wall imagery with the imagery of the fragile child. very moving
thanks it means a lot :)
Hey great poem here. I think the words work really well.
Wow, I'm stunned - great job.
Thanks sooo much :D
the grim reader
very nice work,
IT reads like death is the roses outside the door.
thanks it means a lot, and yeah something like that :)
This poem can have many meanings, I am sure. But it makes sense to me, as i'm sure it does to you.
Another great poem.
thanks so much for reading and commenting :)
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