Poem by: Aerolin
love, dark, death, dying, life, rain, lies, darkness, die, heaven, sky, storm, lightning
Submitted: April 26, 2010
© Copyright 2016 Aerolin. All rights reserved.
very well construted i like it.
thanks so much :D
Haha. You rely heavily on imagery to set the mood and tone for this poem. You characterize the rain as if it's some invisible force holding you against your will even though it may be good. Still, you could use alot of improvement but it deserves a like. :)
Thank you for the constructive criticism it'll really help me out :)
HA great last couple of lines.
A great poem! I really like your poetry!
yayayayss thanks :D
Experiencing other login problems? We can help.