Czyna: The Story

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
Well, its not exactly horror, but its probably the most random thing you've ever read. Actually, I wrote it on msn while talking to my friends Kevyn and Czyna. I ended up with an entire book idea around it. so yeah...enjoy..or something.
oh and Kevyn is a girl and Czyna is pronounced shee-na.
oh yeah and, its also very messed up.

Submitted: March 20, 2009

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Czyna sprints through the forest. She could hear the feet falling behind her....chasing her.

Czyna dives behind a large pine

 Gasping, she leans against the tree, listening intently.There is no sound. Its much too quite, unnatural. She could hear not a bird or squirrel or

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”  A voice screeches in her ear. Czyna spins around and there it is, she is.

 Marie.

Bright red eyes watch Czyna cruelly.

Marie wears only filthy remnants of what once was a uniform that matched Czyna’s. Her once shiny blonde hair is so dirty and matted it could be any color. Crouching on the ground, Marie scuttles towards Czyna

 Czyna backs away.
 Marie lets out the blood curdling scream again
 “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”

 Czyna turns and tries to sprint away. She hardly makes it three feet before Marie grabs her by the ankles and pulls her to the ground.

 Marie pulls up Czyna's pant leg and sinks her teeth into flesh. Blood pools and spills onto the grass. Marie licks it

 Czyna, frozen is shock, whimpers. Marie looks up at her and slowly her mouth pulls back in a horrible grin, blood dribbling down her chin. Marie takes another bite from Czyna’s leg.

 Czyna lets out a terrible scream.
 “Aaaarrrrrggggghhhhhh!”

 Czyna tries to free herself, but Marie’s grip is like iron

 Czyna spots a large branch, not two feet from where she lays.She looks back at Marie. She is preoccupied, lapping up Czyna’s blood.

 Czyna slowly reaches for the branch, careful not alert Marie. Reaching…reaching...

”Grrraaaahhh!”
 Marie screeches at her, but too late.
 Czyna swings the branch at her head.

 Kathunk! It connects with her skull. Marie is stunned for a moment, but it is enough time for Czyna to brake free of her hold.

 Czyna, despite the pain, runs away at full tilt. Czyna can hear Marie’s footsteps echoing her own. Czyna can practically feel Marie’s hot breath on her neck.

 Czyna, searching frantically for a way out stumbles and trips over...a dismembered head.

 “Oh God, no. No!” Czyna screams, realizing who’s head was. It was Kevyn. All that was left of her

 Czyna turns onto her back in time to see Marie leap at her. Czyna tries to roll out of the way but it’s she’s not fast enough.

 Marie pins Czyna to the ground.

Continuing where she left off, Marie again pulls up Czyna’s pant leg. Marie leans down. Czyna feels her sharp teeth on her skin and shivers

 Suddenly, Marie stops.

 She lowers Czyna’s leg and takes Czyna’s head. Holding Czyna’s gently in her arms, she bites down on Czyna’s neck.

 “Nooo!” Czyna moans “I will not let this happen.” Czyna croaks. With all the strength she could muster, she tries to push Marie away.

 With a disgusting sound, like a plunger being pulled from a toilet, Czyna removes Marie mouth from her throat.

 Czyna feels the warm trickling of blood running down her neck. She could also feel Marie’s red eye's on the same spot.

 Czyna then spots on the ground…her rose staff!

 Czyna realizes that she must be very close to the edge. Finally with means of protecting herself, she feels a small trickle of hope flow through her.

 Marie, still staring at Czyna’s punctured neck lunged at her

 Czyna blocks her with the staff.

 Examining her surroundings, Czyna finally finds what she was looking for, a way out. With Marie still on her, Czyna starts to back towards the opening.

 Czyna manages to fling Marie off and makes a break for it.

 All of a sudden, the ground seems to swim before her eyes. She feels something wet running down her front.

“Blood.” She thinks.

 Somehow she had managed to forget that there was blood gushing from her neck.

 “No!” She thinks. “I have to make it, got to get back.”

 Her world spins around her. Unsure of what was even up or down, Czyna sprints as hard as she can, right into a tree.

 “Of course, knowing, my luck.” she thinks.

 Steadying herself again, and turns and sees Marie staring at her from 20 feet away. In quick jerky movements Marie starts towards her again.

“Well, at least she’s injured too.” Czyna thinks.

 Czyna, who was starting to have tunnel vision, runs for the exit again, Marie on her heels.

 Braking through the trees, Czyna bursts into the light.

 “...safe...” Czyna gasps.

 Turning to look at Marie, she sees that she’s crying, big fat tears rolling down her face (well , big fat blobs of blood but still..)

 And with that, Czyna collapses on the sunlit grass.

 
 

Czyna sprints through the forest. She could hear the feet falling behind her....chasing her.

Czyna dives behind a large pine

 Gasping, she leans against the tree, listening intently.There is no sound. Its much too quite, unnatural. She could hear not a bird or squirrel or

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”  A voice screeches in her ear. Czyna spins around and there it is, she is.

 Marie.

Bright red eyes watch Czyna cruelly.

Marie wears only filthy remnants of what once was a uniform that matched Czyna’s. Her once shiny blonde hair is so dirty and matted it could be any color. Crouching on the ground, Marie scuttles towards Czyna

 Czyna backs away.
 Marie lets out the blood curdling scream again
 “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”

 Czyna turns and tries to sprint away. She hardly makes it three feet before Marie grabs her by the ankles and pulls her to the ground.

 Marie pulls up Czyna's pant leg and sinks her teeth into flesh. Blood pools and spills onto the grass. Marie licks it

 Czyna, frozen is shock, whimpers. Marie looks up at her and slowly her mouth pulls back in a horrible grin, blood dribbling down her chin. Marie takes another bite from Czyna’s leg.

 Czyna lets out a terrible scream.
 “Aaaarrrrrggggghhhhhh!”

 Czyna tries to free herself, but Marie’s grip is like iron

 Czyna spots a large branch, not two feet from where she lays.She looks back at Marie. She is preoccupied, lapping up Czyna’s blood.

 Czyna slowly reaches for the branch, careful not alert Marie. Reaching…reaching...

”Grrraaaahhh!”
 Marie screeches at her, but too late.
 Czyna swings the branch at her head.

 Kathunk! It connects with her skull. Marie is stunned for a moment, but it is enough time for Czyna to brake free of her hold.

 Czyna, despite the pain, runs away at full tilt. Czyna can hear Marie’s footsteps echoing her own. Czyna can practically feel Marie’s hot breath on her neck.

 Czyna, searching frantically for a way out stumbles and trips over...a dismembered head.

 “Oh God, no. No!” Czyna screams, realizing who’s head was. It was Kevyn. All that was left of her

 Czyna turns onto her back in time to see Marie leap at her. Czyna tries to roll out of the way but it’s she’s not fast enough.

 Marie pins Czyna to the ground.

Continuing where she left off, Marie again pulls up Czyna’s pant leg. Marie leans down. Czyna feels her sharp teeth on her skin and shivers

 Suddenly, Marie stops.

 She lowers Czyna’s leg and takes Czyna’s head. Holding Czyna’s gently in her arms, she bites down on Czyna’s neck.

 “Nooo!” Czyna moans “I will not let this happen.” Czyna croaks. With all the strength she could muster, she tries to push Marie away.

 With a disgusting sound, like a plunger being pulled from a toilet, Czyna removes Marie mouth from her throat.

 Czyna feels the warm trickling of blood running down her neck. She could also feel Marie’s red eye's on the same spot.

 Czyna then spots on the ground…her rose staff!

 Czyna realizes that she must be very close to the edge. Finally with means of protecting herself, she feels a small trickle of hope flow through her.

 Marie, still staring at Czyna’s punctured neck lunged at her

 Czyna blocks her with the staff.

 Examining her surroundings, Czyna finally finds what she was looking for, a way out. With Marie still on her, Czyna starts to back towards the opening.

 Czyna manages to fling Marie off and makes a break for it.

 All of a sudden, the ground seems to swim before her eyes. She feels something wet running down her front.

“Blood.” She thinks.

 Somehow she had managed to forget that there was blood gushing from her neck.

 “No!” She thinks. “I have to make it, got to get back.”

 Her world spins around her. Unsure of what was even up or down, Czyna sprints as hard as she can, right into a tree.

 “Of course, knowing, my luck.” she thinks.

 Steadying herself again, and turns and sees Marie staring at her from 20 feet away. In quick jerky movements Marie starts towards her again.

“Well, at least she’s injured too.” Czyna thinks.

 Czyna, who was starting to have tunnel vision, runs for the exit again, Marie on her heels.

 Braking through the trees, Czyna bursts into the light.

 “...safe...” Czyna gasps.

 Turning to look at Marie, she sees that she’s crying, big fat tears rolling down her face (well , big fat blobs of blood but still..)

 And with that, Czyna collapses on the sunlit grass.

 
 


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