Diabetes Poem

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Ok. So this is a poem about the crap that I get from inconsiderate people, that I am so lucky to share a school with. This was originally written for a "funniest diabetes peom" contest thing....but i missed the deadline.....enjoy.

Obnoxious, screaming imbeciles
That will be their name
If they don't shut up
I think I'll go insane
"OMG, a needle!"
"Don't do that infront of me!"
The I threaten them "Shut up,
Or I'll stab you in the spleen."
Bustin' of the needle cap
And thrusting the metal twards them
They shriek
And freak
And practically crap themselves
With overeacting hysteria
Laughingly, I stare at them
And they glare back at me
This whole scene happened
'Cause of my lovely diabetes

 


Submitted: April 12, 2009

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FancyJumper

THIS IS COOL! Omg, caps lock was on. Anyway, this is awesome, and people that actually do that can just go die in a hole :(

Annie

Mon, April 13th, 2009 3:49am

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yeah....not naming anyone........orijoerijioaraynairosijrojenysesdklflkdf
their names are in there somewhere-------------------^

Mon, April 13th, 2009 8:05pm

Ukrainiandancer

Thats an awesome poem!!! (i found the names lol!!!)

~~Laurel :D

Fri, April 17th, 2009 11:55pm

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hahaha. their so...blah.

Fri, April 17th, 2009 5:08pm

XxBlueTrumpeterxX

yea so I finally got around to reading this, AWESOME JOB!!! Losers like that can go die, and i found a couple of names XD

Mon, April 20th, 2009 1:48am

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thankya trumpy! =D
those are mean meeeeaaan people, there.

Sun, April 19th, 2009 7:27pm

tastetheblood

Nice poem those people are idiots .

Tue, April 21st, 2009 12:43am

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yup they are...

Tue, April 21st, 2009 4:28pm

neji chan

I love the poem. Very nice. Sorry about the diabetes-even though really, my sorry does nothing-But, at least you get to shut those stupid, loud people up. ^_-

Tue, April 21st, 2009 5:32am

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yup! thanks! =)

Tue, April 21st, 2009 4:28pm

yuu shindemura

juz take care of yourself always about your diabetes. i'm guessing you're IDDM or the type 1? don't worry, pls inject insulins regularly, affliction.

anyway, the poem soothes more to your feelings! i really love poems made at heart. fight your diabetes with optimism! XD

Wed, June 10th, 2009 3:30am

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huzzah....'course...optimism isn't my strong point...

Fri, June 12th, 2009 10:03am

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