A MOST AMAZING PLACE

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imagination out the window

Bewilderment befalls me as Iook into the sculptured skies

Sympathetic dreamy hues softly floating by

Giant clouds of luster step into my view

Hurling wings ferociously playing up thier frenzied cries.

The drama in the air with it's often scary flare,

One day I'd like to soar with it; it's danger and it's grace.

Inside the air to me would be A MOST AMAZING PLACE!


Submitted: May 06, 2007

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leesah

Wow..very vivid imagery..another great piece!

Sun, May 6th, 2007 8:32pm

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thankyou Leesah-it means alot--air

Wed, May 9th, 2007 5:48pm

half chewed pen

A lovely piece .
I once jumped out of a perfectly decent Aircraft I was attached to a parachute which helped but the sensation was so over whelming my brain just completely shut down..No experience on the ground can compare ..your body and minds just shuts off and embraces something truly new ...After Landing I jumped straight back on the plane and done it again .My father died shortly after this and i never persued it..my license expired .I would love to take itup again and learn how to sky dive .
When I have the money I will And I will treat you if your willing .

Wed, January 9th, 2008 12:00am

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Oh My God!!! sounds INCREDIBLE!!! Hell Ya I'll go! lol
that's funny you say, after landing I jumped back on and done it again! lol

Tue, January 8th, 2008 5:01pm

Pratibha

My son uses this phrase "i toll ( told) you" ,some 1000 times a day and that is what i am going to do now...

See, I toll you, whenever i would need some peace, some quiet place, some resting place, I would come here...

and u know what , i am already feeling so so good....

Thu, August 14th, 2008 4:15am

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I hope that peace becomes a part of you that you can touch every day ^_^

Fri, August 15th, 2008 12:05pm

ConcreteAngel

I think this would be my fave that I've read of yours so far! Beautifully written..love your use of words..and you brought attention to the sky..I love the sky!

Tue, October 7th, 2008 2:35am

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Ahhh, Thankyou ^_^
I love the abstract thoughts.
to me they jsut lift me up
and sometimes just fasinate me so and other times excite me.
me too; I love the sky! ^_^

Tue, October 7th, 2008 2:27pm

PaulChafer

Hmm, reminds me of Aztalan. This is the kind of thing I am alluding to when I say you influenced the way that place works in my novels.

Got my vote, very ethereal.
Paul.

Sat, June 12th, 2010 7:38am

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Awesome, even the name 'Aztalan' is outstanding!
One day there's going to a movie on these stories Paul, one day, it would be nice...

Sat, June 12th, 2010 1:17am

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