Poem by: air
treasure, silence, skies, heavens-gate
Submitted: May 07, 2007
Down an endless treasure grove
Speechless be the idle road
Silence grows in watery eyes
Cemented to our wonderous skies.
Only now to tell her fate
Waiting here at heavens gate.
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This poem grows with the reading. Sweet!
Ohhh, Thankyou Anne! this is an older one, I always liked this one too. Thanks so much for reading....have a nice day...katie
This is good. If you could expand it, add more to it, it would be awesome. It feels like I'm reading an excerpt from an epic poem like Tennyson's 'The Lotus Eaters', or
Browning's 'Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came'.
I Like It. Let me know if and when you plan to do more to it.
oh who knows if I ever will... every so often I go over poems and attempt to make a book/books out of them.
I was reading your attempts at publishing, and it is not easy.
I do know that we can publish on line for free so I might do that. Others have hired editors and had to pay them like $2,000 for very small booklets so.....
But for publishing purposes I'd have to go over and redo many a poem I suppose...
Thankyou so much Sean though, I indeed like this one also.
It was written in 04 at a time of coming into a newness.
And a dropping of the old.
I have not read Brownings, Tennysons or barely any published works for that matter. Maybe one day shall/should ?
This poem is absolutley beautiful I had shared it with repect to you of coursebefore on my facebook page but deleted it by accident wish you would put the whole one up again so i can share i just love it....
Hi Linda, what was/is your pen name here?
I don't know what you mean; 'the whole one'
this is all there ever was.
Feel free to share it, add to it what ever you wish ;-)
Hi! Katie maybe i was on a different page it took me a while to find this again because there are several of heavens gate poems. Who knows maybe the person just took it down. I don't know the authors name because i had deleted it.
However it was definity one of the verse's i loved it so much.
Katie i don't have a pen name on this page just passing through. Thank you so much for answering me
Linda, Linda from Tracy MN?
Several yah, and the person probly took down all their writing or are maybe gone from booksie completely.
Some writers have gone to 'writer cafe' or
'hello poetry' or another one can't remember the name..
oh I think one is called 'poetry freak' or something like that haha :-)
Ok, well thanks for stopping by :-)
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