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speaking of peace and interconnected wisdom that is felt through deep awareness


Sometimes deep inside, my heart opens wide

What I feel so unreal and intence,

Let's me know that I'm magically blessed.


 Presence is felt in the moments that melt

Like sparkeling dazzeling flakes of snow

And promise is met in the things that I know


Knowledge that seeps from out of the mist

Comes to me now like one giant kiss

So fresh, so fragrant, so silent, so new

A calm in my mind which states 'I LOVE YOU'


Happiness felt in turn from our land

Lifts me high as I rest in the PALM OF ITS HAND


Submitted: May 08, 2007

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Oh, bravo!!! That is lovely! Beautifully spiritual and refreshing!

Wed, May 9th, 2007 4:18am


thankyou, I so glad to have it move someone--thankyou, thankyou

Wed, May 9th, 2007 4:43pm


Refreshing for sure.....I felt the rhythm ...
U and Me believe in GOD so much ....I am glad I could relate to so many ways

Tue, April 15th, 2008 1:25am


Thankyou Pratibha, yes so much so that i feel the presence almost always. I wrote this in the first year of waking up, and the world was so beautiful I thought I must be dyeing LOL! weird huh? I had not known or seen in that way before.

Mon, April 14th, 2008 10:39pm

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