Poem by: air
Genre: Religion and Spirituality
Submitted: February 18, 2008
moments are unheard
absence of time circumvents
essence is adorned
© Copyright 2016 air. All rights reserved.
Yes, stopping time is key. It should be our goal in every moment. I've known certain occurrences where time and space evaporated. How wonderful.
you have? cool! so you will have to tell me more sometime.
my way is mostly through meditation but it happens throughout the day also, since I adapted to capturing moments. I once experienced moving and yet knowing at the same time that it only seemed that way. it only seems as though we are moving because of our perception of linear time. LOL no one will comment now they will all think I am coo-coo LOL! (giggle) well at least I'll still have you. (smile) different times of the year/month/day the energy seems smoother to kinda sink into; do you know what I mean?
well anyway take care, peace and love...katie
I love this haiku, Katie! And I'm not just saying that because I like you and haiku a bunch! The opening line just totally grabs me... "moments are unheard" and I'm honestly not sure why other than I feel so many moments in my life have been unheard. Keep writing my dear!!!.....Jerry
Oh what an awesome thing to say Jerry: 'so many moments in my life have been unheard' Yes I think that is a very fair assesment of how it is and we feel in the end, if only.......?
I would like to be of more assistance to peoples to help them to be able to catch moments you know Jerry because really it is so important....hey, awesome conversation....Thank You!*
Beautiful haiku - it is difficult to encaptulate the true essence of a haiku but you have done it superbly here. Truly evocative.
Well Thankyou so much Anna, I most appreciate your comment :) katie*
Hi, Katie! Very awesome and powerful words. I try to meditate daily. It keeps me feeling so good. And you captured it just right in three short lines!
Oh do you? that's wonderful! I just LOVE the feel of the energy~take care MA, have a lovely night*
Hi Katie! I really do love Haiku. The simplicity of it with undertones of something deeper. This one was very good. Makes me want to start meditating again! Its been a while since I've done it and I'm thinking it would be good for me.
Love the Haiku!
HEY ^_^ booksie is up and running again YIPPY!
oh yes, meditation, the best cd's for taking you into the state are by Dr. Jerrery Thompson. there are two that I beleive are the best: "Theta Meditation System" and:
"Awakened Mind System" they are EXCELLENT ^_^ lol
yes I love Haiku too, Jerry made them popular here, otherwise I never would have gotten into them.
thankyou Buttercup, hope your night is wonderful
i absolutely loved this Air...it has that serene feeling of me in a quiet place amidst trees, flowers and nothing around me except love and careless days...drifting waves around my feet...and kriish wbeing taken care of by sanjib...heehee...blissful thinking....
hehehehe, yes we need those moments....'careless days...drifting waves....' *smiles of sunshine*
and all is being cared for... :)
Nicely written, peacefull piece.
thankyou scott ^_^
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