Value your mistakes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Making mistakes is a must read! be sure to leave a comment and become a fan if you really like my poetry! thank you :) -YanaJade-i

Ever feel like the world 

around you is moving on,

to bigger better things.

While your stuck in the past

not moving on,

dwelling on how life should be?

the only solution in conclusion is create it.

Come out of this feeling off stuncknes,

In Vision what  or where you want your life to go.

Because at the end of the day,

Life is full of mistakes,

and what do you do when you make mistakes?

You learn from them.

 

-YanaJade-  

 


Submitted: October 23, 2012

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SmileValentine

all people commit mistakes, but we should value them at the same time. it's a part of our lives. just felt like saying that :) anyway, keep writing friend :)

Wed, October 24th, 2012 4:54am

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its true hehe thank you -YanaJade-

Wed, October 24th, 2012 6:07pm

BriShay

This poem has true meaning. Not a lot of poems have that. It's not like you just threw some words together and tried to make them flow, I feel you took the meaning of the poem seriously and took writing this poem seriously. Disregard the ignorant comment at the top, for someone who has only written ONE poem and put it on this site (a meaningless poem at that!), he feels he has a lot of smart things to say. He doesn't matter, but what matters is that I LIKE the poem and overall good job!


-Brishay ?

Fri, October 26th, 2012 9:07pm

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Thank you so much for your feedback! -YANAjade

Mon, November 19th, 2012 7:37pm

babalo

I like this poem too...deep and heartfelt honesty, well done.

Sat, November 3rd, 2012 9:47pm

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Thank you very much -YanaJade-

Mon, November 19th, 2012 7:38pm

catastrophicwords

superb..

Sun, November 25th, 2012 8:33am

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thank you -YanaJade-

Fri, November 30th, 2012 4:40am

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