My Mental Mind

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My mind.

My mental home has no windows

My mental self does no meeting or greeting

My mental steps go at a winds blow

My mental phone does no ringing and ringing

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My mental door is hideous

My mental roof is perforated

My mental infirmary is infectious

My mental mind is inebriated

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My mental staffs are never on call

My mental cellar is a shame full vacuum

My mental veins have yet to thaw

My mental heart is a lullabied black room


Submitted: July 14, 2009

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flavoredair

"My mental mind is inebriated"- mine too, but "My mental veins have yet to thaw" is my favorite statement. That's important, I can't pin point it, but I know it is, like maybe we are not fully conscious.

Thu, July 16th, 2009 2:37pm

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Thank you!
I'm grateful you read and responded to it.
Take care!

Mon, July 20th, 2009 12:42pm

frog

i could see spending a whole hour in english class having a conversation about the deeper meanings in this poem.

Sat, August 22nd, 2009 5:51pm

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Thank you so much! That's really awesome to hear.

Wed, September 16th, 2009 9:57am

personwhowantstofeel

I love how differnt this is. Such deep meaning.

Tue, February 16th, 2010 2:26am

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Appreciate the comment!

Sun, February 21st, 2010 11:11am

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