jump?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
its about a young girl who is considering suicide

Submitted: April 14, 2013

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She stood there, frozen like a statue, looking down at the waves. i should just jump shouldnt i? she thought to herself. her bare toes crinkled on the cold, sharp, rocky clif side.. im hallow... nothing maters anymore. she listend to the waves pound on cliff side. to her it was peacefull, so she closed her eyes and took a step forword. its not like anyone would even care if i jumped... i told them what happend. how the razor had become closer to me than my "friends". they said i was just looking for attention. the tip of her toes now were hanging off the cliff . my dad always told me i wasnt good enough... that i needed to get my act together. a pebel from beneth her right foot fell down off the edge off the cliff. JUST JUMP!!. her mind screemed. a bird soared above her head looking down at her. soon i will be free with the birds.  she willed herself forward, now both feet were only half on the sharp cliff. 3. she started to count down. 2 .one more baby step and she would be gone. 1. 

-peace at last 


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