If i were to die
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Poem by: Alcaeus Uilleag
If i were to die right now,
would anyone miss me?
Would they say "wow,
he's dead i now see".
If i were to be bombed by a guy named Ray,
would someone realized I died,
out of the hundreds who died today,
and know i tried to save us but ened up fried?
Sitting here i wonder if this time,
The killer knows what he will do.
If the other killers he'll mime,
instead of saving me too.
Rumors go around always,
It's best not to listen to them.
But one type of rumor will say,
the killer will the creepy one, well, like him.
Wether they are right or wrong,
If they're right who cares?
The killer will say his crazy monologue,
and we will only end up in flares.
If i were to seriously die right NOW,
who would miss the little freshie?
Would they truthfully say "wow,
I will miss the things he's done to and for me."
© Copyright 2018 Alcaeus Uilleag. All rights reserved.
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kill yourself
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thanks for the advice ill take consideration to that
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It doesn't sound good to read... i mean if it's talking about such a grave topic, you shouldn't use words like "fried"... make it sound at least a bit poetic!
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lo siento... i said i made it during class so i couldnt think straight with our teacher yellin at us... other ones i wrote are made under less pressure tho...
once again, written when i was bored in class, meaning no enthusiasm...srry
its a good topic. i totally understand the "under pressure, in class" thing. i used to have a lot of things i would do in class, then i would read them, and after a bit of work they turned out so-so.
dont kill yourself
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